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Sarn Shild
- Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
- Date Requested: 01:12, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 07:41, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
Object
- Death field should follow precedent of including date and location in a note if not directly citeable to a source.
- Needs a pronouns/gender update.
- I think the intro could be split into two paragraphs.
- The biography should be sectioned, and more images added.
- Rampa 2 missing context.
- Use of slave to be changed per modern precedent.
- Is the mention in The New Jedi Order: Agents of Chaos II: Jedi Eclipse notable in anyway to be included in the biography (even if in a legacy section)?
- The personality traits section should be split into two paragraphs.
- Anything that can be included in skills/abilities and/or equipment sections?
- If mentioned in The New Essential Chronology, the characters in-universe mention should be included.
- BTS needs to be cleaned up to remove redundant information about later sources Sarn was mentioned in. Lewisr (talk) 01:12, 16 July 2024 (UTC)
