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Sair Yonka
- Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
- Date Requested: 19:45, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 00:33, 3 March 2024 (UTC)
Object
- Some missing context for locations throughout.
- Would like to see some years added to intro.
- Any subject-relevant images available to populate the article?
- Him being tall/slender is more meant for PT.
- Biography can get sectioned out a bit more, and paragraphs broken up some to meet modern standard.
- PT can be sectioned in two.
- Equipment/skills section.
- Pronoun/gender/family fields updates + first-usage pronoun refs.
- BtS cleanup.—spookywillowwtalk 19:45, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
Comments
- Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:30, 3 February 2024 (UTC)
