Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Nek Bwua'tu

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Nek Bwua'tu

shortening the massive paragraphs.
More images in P&T and the latter two history sections.
BTS needs to be cleaned up.
Dating notes in the body and the succession boxes.
Perhaps a quote for "skills and abilities"?
It seems like that image is from 2010 Topps Star Wars Galaxy Series 5, which should be in sources, and maybe a {tl|1stp} if it is 1stp, should be noted in BTS.
Equipment section (at least to describe the uniform she wears in her one image). ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 02:46, 9 November 2023 (UTC)

Gender/pronouns while we're here Fan26 (Talk) 00:30, 9 December 2023 (UTC)

There is at times too much exposition of the overall plot of Fate of the Jedi in the "Later career" section, so they should be copy-edited for concision, but I'm also pretty sure that the section could be expanded with more details of Nek Bwua'tu's characterisation. The P&T should definitely be expanded with his relationship with Daala and possibly a bit with his uncle Eramuth as well. OOM 224 (he/him) 12:57, 10 December 2023 (UTC)

Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywilloww^talk 00:02, 9 December 2023 (UTC)