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Nek Bwua'tu
- Requested By: ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola
- Date Requested: 02:46, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 06:31, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
Object
ThrawnChiss7
- shortening the massive paragraphs.
- More images in P&T and the latter two history sections.
- BTS needs to be cleaned up.
- Dating notes in the body and the succession boxes.
- Perhaps a quote for "skills and abilities"?
- It seems like that image is from 2010 Topps Star Wars Galaxy Series 5, which should be in sources, and maybe a {tl|1stp} if it is 1stp, should be noted in BTS.
- Equipment section (at least to describe the uniform she wears in her one image). ThrawnChiss7
Assembly Cupola 02:46, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
Fan
OOM
- There is at times too much exposition of the overall plot of Fate of the Jedi in the "Later career" section, so they should be copy-edited for concision, but I'm also pretty sure that the section could be expanded with more details of Nek Bwua'tu's characterisation. The P&T should definitely be expanded with his relationship with Daala and possibly a bit with his uncle Eramuth as well. OOM 224 (he/him) 12:57, 10 December 2023 (UTC)
Comments
- Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 00:02, 9 December 2023 (UTC)
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Two months unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 05:01, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 05:11, 10 January 2024 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 05:32, 10 January 2024 (UTC)