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Kibh Jeen
- Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
- Date Requested: 01:35, 23 November 2023 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 00:24, 23 January 2024 (UTC)
Object
- Death references to be merged into one note per precedent.
- Pronoun/gender and family fields updates to be completed.
- Needs a solid WP:MOS copy-edit, seeing a lot of words such as pronouns and indefinite articles such as "a" and "the linked.
- Intro split into two paragraphs?
- Biography subsectioning needed, optimally 2-3 paragraphs per. Relevant quotes and images to fill in each, and perhaps enlargening the images currently there to better match Fandom's current layout.
- I'd like all the other BBY dates mentioned to be investigated to ensure they don't need separate date notes, just in case, as this is an older nom and I'm not sure all are sustainable.
- Equipment to be sectioned out.
- BtS modernization - some information to be cut. Link for Daniel Wallace can likely be worked into the BtS prose proper if necessary, rather than quote caption linking.
- Solve remaining maintenance category issues (blogspot archivevalue).
Comments
- Marked for probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywillowwtalk 02:35, 23 December 2023 (UTC)
