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Kamlin
- Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
- Date Requested: 00:11, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
- Date Archived: 11:55, 15 November 2024 (UTC)
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- Death field needs to combine the location and date in a single date note per modern precedent.
- Needs a gender/pronouns update.
- I'm not seeing the need for the double reference for Kamlin being a Falleen in the infobox.
- Hair and skin are infobox exclusive.
- Unnecessary links in quote and image captions can be removed.
- A BBY date in the intro would be nice to add.
- Is there no quote that could be added in the "Jedi training" section of the biography?
- The "Jedi training" section should be sectioned.
- With the above, there will be room for another image in the biography.
- Some of the personality/traits looks like it should be split into separate skills/abilities and equipment sections (along with anything else of note added to those sections).
- The BTS needs to be overhauled to remove redundant mentions of other issues/sources that Kamlin appeared in/was mentioned. And what issues/sources with noteworthy information that remain need to have release dates. Lewisr (talk) 00:11, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
