Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Jon Antilles

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Jon Antilles

  • Requested By: Lewisr (talk)
  • Date Requested: 00:35, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 07:34, 25 August 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Needs a pronouns/gender update.
    • Added pronoun. ToRsO bOy (talk) 18:17, 8 August 2024 (UTC)
      • Just to confirm, was Jon referred to as a male in the comic? Lewisr (talk) 20:25, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
        • They just used his pronoun there (I amended the source for the pronoun). Only other source that says he's male is the SW databank.ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:14, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Not possible to get any form of color for skin?
    • Couldn't find any mention from the sources. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:14, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Would like to see a date in the intro.
    • Added both to intro and body. ToRsO bOy (talk) 18:17, 8 August 2024 (UTC)
  • The "Mission to Queyta" section in the biography looks like it should sectioned.
    • Sorry, can you remind me what "sectioned" means? ToRsO bOy (talk) 18:17, 8 August 2024 (UTC)
      • The section needs to be split into 2 smaller ones so it has 2 groups of 2 paragraphs within it, hopefully that clears up Lewisr (talk) 20:14, 8 August 2024 (UTC)
  • The images besides the one of the Dark Woman should be increased in size.
    • Increased the others by 50px. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:14, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
  • The paragraphs in the personality and traits section should be reworked into either 2 or 3 paras instead of 4.
    • Combined the last 2 paragraphs. ToRsO bOy (talk) 18:17, 8 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Missing an equipment section.
    • Added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 14:45, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
      • His robes should be mentioned as well Lewisr (talk) 20:25, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
        • Added them plus some details on his tunic as well. Loki-Is-Cool Jedi symbol 11:08, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
          • Removed the color and added source. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:14, 12 August 2024 (UTC)
  • BTS missing a release date for the comic and an illustrator.
    • Added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 14:45, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
      • Sorry I missed this originally, but publisher should be added as well Lewisr (talk) 20:25, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
  • Is the last paragraph of the BTS really needed? Unsure of the relevance for this page in particular Lewisr (talk) 00:35, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
    • Removed it. Don't understand why it was added in the first place, it doesn't seem very connected to Jon Antilles... Loki-Is-Cool Jedi symbol 11:27, 10 August 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:24, 28 July 2024 (UTC)
  • Made the images larger (except the Dark Woman one per the request) Loki-Is-Cool Jedi symbol 12:03, 29 July 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

  1. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 00:18, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:01, 25 August 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 07:34, 25 August 2024 (UTC)

Vote to strip Featured status