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EV-9D9

  • Requested By: —spookywillowwtalk
  • Date Requested: 20:34, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Date Archived: 15:47, 24 January 2024 (UTC)

Object

  • Initially tagged for update a month ago, has since also been tagged for another update as well.—spookywillowwtalk 20:34, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
    • The article has now been completely updated and is ready for review (though will obviously need to be updated with D-Squad 4). This was a massive update, and the only section that was not touched was the Bts. Panther436 (talk) 04:30, 29 November 2023 (UTC)
  • I think the intro could use some beefing up Lewisr (talk) 04:23, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Context for Mos Eisley, Tatooine in the intro Lewisr (talk) 04:23, 25 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Will address these and do an overall review and refresh of the article once I'm done updating the article, which should be in the next few days but is admittedly taking longer than I thought. Panther436 (talk) 04:22, 26 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Both of these have now been addressed Panther436 (talk) 04:30, 29 November 2023 (UTC)
  • The sources/appearances section should document which sources first used the names "Eve-Ninedenine", "Eve" and "9D9".
  • Alternate names need to be covered in the BTS section. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 22:20, 11 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Looks like she is featured in a card part of 2023 Topps Star Wars Chrome Black. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 22:50, 11 December 2023 (UTC)
  • The Droidography book doesn't refer to EV having feminine programming (only uses she/her pronouns), so that will need another source Lewisr (talk) 23:15, 19 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Jumped in and fixed that, cited to POV since it calls her the "Queen" of Durasteel Editoronthewiki (talk) 23:21, 19 December 2023 (UTC)
  • I think the 'At one point after the end of the Scourge threat' sentence shouldn't be cited to the 2022 Revelations issue since it doesn't really depict the aftermath of it, nor include EV in it Lewisr (talk) 23:15, 19 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Nice work. Minor, but that 0 BBY date ref needs some reworking as general site precedent has been to follow Timelines and its placement of Rogue One in 1 BBY, with only ANH itself being "year 0."—spookywillowwtalk 00:28, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
  • The Mando episode 5 date can be amended to reflect Timelines dating of the episode Lewisr (talk) 04:12, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Can the first pronouns uses be cited to their current cites? Lewisr (talk) 04:12, 12 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Yes, they can Panther436 (talk) 03:39, 13 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Added a couple I wasn't seeing in the cited refs Lewisr (talk) 19:34, 22 January 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • Gonna do my best to help this one retain status but there's a lot of "The Key to Remembering" info and I need to track down the "Super Graphic" book so hopefully it doesn't take too long. Panther436 (talk) 16:59, 11 October 2023 (UTC)
    • I actually have the book if you haven't already purchased it. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 22:07, 11 October 2023 (UTC)
    • I went ahead and completed the Super Graphic update, so you're good to go there. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 19:51, 13 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Just to note that I've updated the article with the latest comic of the Marvel Star Wars line (again), and I'll be keeping an eye for potential further updates from the comics. OOM 224 (he/him) 15:02, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Leaving a paperwork note so the bot stops flagging this review; to be paused until that last comic comes out. Not much point in passing it before when it's so soon.—spookywillowwtalk 18:09, 20 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Went ahead and updated the article with the new D-Squad issue. Ended up being super minimal, main thing it added was an inconsistency lol Panther436 (talk) 06:15, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Wanted to leave a note that an ongoing TC affects this and should likely be allowed to close so we know whether to alter this page's IU mention. Apologies on this turning into a longer review than anticipated, it randomly started appearing in stuff. Last BH issue is also out very soon so, as long as it's not in that, I'll be voting after.—spookywillowwtalk 00:05, 16 January 2024 (UTC)

Vote to retain Featured status

  1. Inqvote OOM 224 (he/him) 18:17, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Good stuff —spookywillowwtalk 15:44, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 15:46, 24 January 2024 (UTC)

Vote to strip Featured status