Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Dol Grenn

Requested By: — spookywilloww talk
Date Requested: 02:28, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
Date Archived: 00:19, 1 February 2024 (UTC)

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Dol Grenn

Pronouns/gender/family fields update.
Missing a significant amount of context for subjects throughout most areas of article.
Date needed for Bombing of Telos IV.
Citadel Station arrival date of 3951 BBY needs a date note.
Linking of indefinite articles present.
Run-on sentences throughout.
BtS does not mention any sources or release dates.
Subsection "Defending Telos" can be broken up a bit.
Would like to see relevant imagery added where available in spots with none.
Skills/Equipment sections to be added.—spookywilloww^talk 02:28, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
No quote that can be added to the "early life and career" section?
Dup links, including the one for Citadel Station in the caption
Infobox exclusive info Lewisr (talk) 02:31, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
That BtS could probably be more specific in regards to different outcomes based on player choices. Fan26 (Talk) 02:43, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
There's some language (e.g. "for all intents and purposes,") that doesn't match the encyclopedic tone expected of a status article Fan26 (Talk) 02:43, 1 December 2023 (UTC)

Marked for probation at 1 month unaddressed.—spookywilloww^talk 00:13, 1 January 2024 (UTC)

Two months (first-round) unaddressed.—spookywilloww^talk 00:03, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
Fan26 (Talk) 00:17, 1 February 2024 (UTC)
Lewisr (talk) 00:18, 1 February 2024 (UTC)