Wookieepedia:Featured article reviews/Adari Vaal

Requested By: Lewisr ( talk )
Date Requested: 01:11, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
Date Archived: 06:29, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article that failed review. Please do not modify it.

Adari Vaal

The death field should include the date and location in a note as per precedent.
Needs a pronouns/gender update.
Family fields need to be filled in/cleared out.
The paragraps throughout from the intro to the PT are in real need of being split up further and more sectionings as a result in the body.
The above would give room for some more images as well.
Will need an equipment section, and anything of note to be included in a skills/abilities section.
The BTS needs to be cleared up to remove redundant information, but also needs to include ful release dates for Precipice and Skyborn as both are released in 2009. Lewisr (talk) 01:11, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Marked as on probation at 1 month unaddressed. Lewisr (talk) 00:02, 27 July 2024 (UTC)