Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Zeison Sha

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Zeison Sha

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 total)

Support

1. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 16:01, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
2. Gets my vote.Master Aban Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 19:00, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
3. Thefourdotelipsis 01:01, 2 December 2007 (UTC)
4. That thing looks like it would hurt.—Graestan^{(This party's over)} 04:50, 2 December 2007 (UTC)
5. Greyman^(Paratus) 14:09, 3 December 2007 (UTC)
6. -- Darth Culator ^(Talk) 02:01, 7 December 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

1. From the fjord of Imperialles:
   • The infobox needs to be sourced.
     • Sourced. Master Aban Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 19:00, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
   • The "History" section contains several one- or two-sentence paragraphs. Either merge these with existing paragraphs, or expand them enough to warrant separate paragraphs. This is an article, not a chronological list of facts.
   • The above phenomenon appears in the "Philosophy" and "Common abilities" sections as well.

   --Imperialles 16:39, 1 December 2007 (UTC)

   • Addressed, as much as possible. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 19:14, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
2. From the squalid cubicle of Graestan:
   • Link more thoroughly, please. Once per article or once in intro/once in main body, and I noticed a few missing links.
     • Relinked. Master Aban Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 19:00, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
   • The last sentence of "History" is somewhat ponderous.
     • Addressed. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 19:14, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
   • "Their use of the Force was built around its use for defense" is a bit awkward.
     • Fixed. Master Aban Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 19:00, 1 December 2007 (UTC)
   • —Graestan^{(This party's over)} 16:46, 1 December 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 22:44, 8 December 2007 (UTC)

• This is over 1,100 words for those wondering. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 16:01, 1 December 2007 (UTC)