Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/YV-100 light freighter

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YV-100 light freighter

  • Nominated by:JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 16:00, 18 May 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:From GA probation to FAN.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total/INQCON 5)

Support

  1. YV-100 Jorrel's FAN, everything checked here. Get ready to take off, and clear skies. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:45, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Insert funny message here. — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 22:23, 5 June 2009 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Good show.—Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG (No quarter given, all exits sealed) 00:24, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 20:09, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 15:32, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:18, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. Unidentified YV-100, this is Farlstendoiro. Do not take off, repeat, do not take off
    • However, the YV-100 freighter offered was a modified craft; it wasn't until another RPG supplement, this time on Corellian Engineering Corporation products, was written by Owen K.C. Stephens and published in Star Wars Gamer 2. I think the second sentence needs some more words, something like "that the stats for an un-modified YV-100 were known", if you see what I mean.
      • I do see what you mean, and I have appropriately added such words. Good catch.
    • Can you provide a timeframe for the events under "Role"? The mission to Myrkr must have happened around 26-27 ABY, I guess; and I think we had decided Tempest Feud happened between 53 BBY and 18 BBY.
      • Well, I'm not sure if there's a standard for mentioning such a broad span of time (as in the case of the Tempest). I'm willing to put it in there, but I'd need some Inq input either way. I did clarify the other part (about Myrkr) by making sure I mentioned that it was during the Yuuzhan Vong War. If that's not specfific enough I'll toss the years in that mention too.
        • I'll accept the Inq's decision; but if you simply say "during the last years of the Old Republic", it'll be enough for me.
          • That works for me as well. Check it out now; added bit about the timeline. JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 09:40, 20 May 2009 (UTC)
    • Otherwise fine. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:31, 19 May 2009 (UTC)
      • Thanks for the read/review! JorrelWiki-shrinkableFraajic 23:49, 19 May 2009 (UTC)
  2. From the Desk of Atarumaster88
    • "The ship was well-built and hardy" A bit POVish.
      • Changed to a more accurate description per sources.
    • "the modularity common in CEC lines; as such the YV-100," Uh . . . this is the YV-100. Clarify?
    • "not content with their huge successes with the YT series line, began the YV series." Some basic time frame would be good, if possible.
      • Gave it the best I could.
    • Last para of BTS smells faintly of Original Research.
      • Removed. Possible remnant of the original article, or from someone who said something about the image somewhere.
    • Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 19:57, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 09:18, 15 June 2009 (UTC)