Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Wol Cabasshite/Legends

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Wol Cabasshite

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Thefourdotelipsis 22:23, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
2. As one of the writers of the previous and now almost obliterated version...8) —Silly Dan _(talk) 01:25, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
   • Sorry about that. :S Thefourdotelipsis 03:23, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
3. Ass and shite, Dot. Shite. Graestan^{(This party's over)} 02:02, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
4. Greyman^(Paratus) 13:44, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
5. Honestly, not a great concept. But a well-written article. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 04:06, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
6. --Eyrezer 03:14, 21 December 2007 (UTC)
7. -- Darth Culator ^(Talk) 04:19, 24 December 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

1. Reference two needs a name. Also, in the intro, you say their society was based on communciation, while later in the article it states that their culture was built on philosophy. The intro also goes from their communication-based society to their philosophy texts. These two objections kind of go together, and I know what you mean, but please clean that up. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 02:01, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
   • I think I've tidied that up. I had a bit of a brain fart while writing that bit, it seems. Thefourdotelipsis 03:23, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
2. From the desk of Atarumaster88
   • "Fearing that it may evolve to Type A and wipe out Tatooine's Wol Cabasshite populace"- present tense, 4dot? For shame.
     • Duuuh....fixed.
   • "Most famous" status for that Jedi Master in intro is POV.
     • I beg to differ. The Asshite is mentioned in one major IU text, and then mentioned in greater depth in another. No other Assshite has achieved this to our knowledge. At the moment, he is the most famous Wol Cabasshite IU.
       • Meh, fine. You'd think I was trying to get a History section or something. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 04:06, 16 December 2007 (UTC)
   • "When Wol Cabasshites were afflicted by Brainworm Rot Type A, it was considered difficult to diagnose, simply due to the nature of the Wol Cabasshites themselves." Clarification needed if available.
     • Clarified a tad. Thefourdotelipsis 22:54, 14 December 2007 (UTC)
   • Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 20:12, 14 December 2007 (UTC)

Comments

• Yes. Ass and Shit. Thefourdotelipsis 22:23, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
  • Hope that makes sense, I had a hard time "verbalizing" it. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 02:01, 14 December 2007 (UTC)