Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Virgillian Free Alignment/Legends

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Virgillian Free Alignment/Legends

• Nominated by:
  • Dropbearemma (she/her) 11:07, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
  • ℳÅℕ☉❂Ⅎ (he/him/his) 13:23, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: This has squeaked into FAN territory by exactly three (3) words, so uh If I end up taking out stuff, I'll have to withdraw. If you read Virgillian Civil War when I FANed that, get ready to learn exactly zero new information, but it is arranged differently.
• Date Archived: 14:11, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1120 words (152 introduction, 902 body, 66 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS

(0 Inqs/0 Users/0 Total)

(Votes required: 3 Inq vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 4 user or 2 Inq votes required to pass.)

Support

Object

Samonic

• Preliminary objection: The article's intro should be expanded. The article's body is 900 words long and the introduction is 35 words long, take a look at this flowchart and expand the intro accordingly. I'd say a 900 words long article's intro should be 100-190 words long. Samonic ^(Talk) 11:17, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Intro expanded ℳÅℕ☉❂Ⅎ (he/him/his) 13:23, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
• Missing links. You can link to the Galactic Civil War earlier in the intro.
• A group's Description shouldn't cover its History in such detail, you'll have to move a few things.
• Let's see some sectioning in History. The image alignment is wrong, too. Samonic ^(Talk) 15:08, 7 May 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• Emma has asked me to take over her nominations ℳÅℕ☉❂Ⅎ (he/him/his) 13:23, 5 April 2023 (UTC)

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

1. Objections have been unaddressed for more than 15 days, and the nominator is currently blocked. LucaRoR ^(Talk) 13:39, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 13:43, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 14:10, 22 May 2023 (UTC)