- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Contents
Virgillian Free Alignment/Legends
- Nominated by:
- Dropbearemma
(she/her) 11:07, 2 April 2023 (UTC) - ℳÅℕ☉❂Ⅎ (he/him/his)
13:23, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
- Dropbearemma
- Nomination comments: This has squeaked into FAN territory by exactly three (3) words, so uh If I end up taking out stuff, I'll have to withdraw. If you read Virgillian Civil War when I FANed that, get ready to learn exactly zero new information, but it is arranged differently.
- Date Archived: 14:11, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1120 words (152 introduction, 902 body, 66 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS
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Support
Object
Samonic
Preliminary objection: The article's intro should be expanded.The article's body is 900 words longand the introduction is 35 words long, take a look at this flowchart and expand the intro accordingly.I'd say a 900 words long article's intro should be 100-190 words long. Samonic
(Talk) 11:17, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
- Intro expanded ℳÅℕ☉❂Ⅎ (he/him/his)
13:23, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
- Intro expanded ℳÅℕ☉❂Ⅎ (he/him/his)
- Missing links. You can link to the Galactic Civil War earlier in the intro.
- A group's Description shouldn't cover its History in such detail, you'll have to move a few things.
- Let's see some sectioning in History. The image alignment is wrong, too. Samonic
(Talk) 15:08, 7 May 2023 (UTC)
Comments
- Emma has asked me to take over her nominations ℳÅℕ☉❂Ⅎ (he/him/his)
13:23, 5 April 2023 (UTC)
Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)
Objections have been unaddressed for more than 15 days, and the nominator is currently blocked. LucaRoR
(Talk) 13:39, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 13:43, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 14:10, 22 May 2023 (UTC)