Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Uueg Tching

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Uueg Tching

• Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 01:08, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

1. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 22:15, 1 August 2008 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:29, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
3. Greyman^(Talk) 07:28, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
4. Master Aban Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 00:02, 16 August 2008 (UTC)
5. -- Darth Culator ^(Talk) 03:19, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

1. From LtNOWIS
   • You should change the phrase "the select couple who did" to be more encyclopedic.
     • Altered it.
   • Also in the intro, "at COMPOR rallies, historical documents" should probably be "at COMPOR rallies, in historical documents."
     • Done.
   • Is there a reason why he's always referred to by his first name? -LtNOWIS 12:55, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
     • Yeah—he's only referred to as "Uueg" in both the AJ and the Imperial Sourcebook, and I figured Atrisian naming conventions may be different to the norm. -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 12:58, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
2. Jadson's stuff:
   • Context on COMPOR (in the intro).
     • I de-abbreviated it; is that what you're looking for?
       • Yeah.
   • You refer to the planet as both Kitel Phard and Atrisia. Pick one and stick with it.
     • Changed the one "Kitel Phard" I found to "Atrisia."
   • Great article. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 19:46, 30 July 2008 (UTC)
     • Thanks for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 19:43, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
3. Toprawa:
   • I'm not sure what this means, exactly, "indirectly." Can we supplement this with anything? "until he controlled the entire planet, both directly and indirectly."
     • Unfortunately, that's all the source says. "Uueg increased the Atrisian Empire to rule, directly or indirectly, the whole of Kitel Phard."
   • We should really have an article on this "Atrisian script," especially if that image in the article is an illustration of it. At least create a red link, please.
     • Done.
   • I think it would be best to use our Insider template for the HoloNet appearance. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:53, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
     • Done. Thank you for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 21:16, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
       • Sure. A genuinely interesting concept. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:29, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 06:12, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

• I will deal with the redlinks in the morning. -- AdmirableAckbar ^(Talk) 01:08, 22 July 2008 (UTC)