Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Unidentified Naboo village (OOM-9)

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Unidentified Naboo village (OOM-9)

• Nominated by: Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:12, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: My favourite part of this level is turning the Naboo soldiers against their own people
• Date Archived: 08:36, 10 October 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1383 words (168 introduction, 906 body, 309 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 16:43, 8 July 2023 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 20:07, 14 August 2023 (UTC)
3. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:56, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
4. Tomotron^{Sith Council} 02:10, 29 September 2023 (UTC)
5. Panther436 (talk) 02:35, 6 October 2023 (UTC)
6. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 08:34, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

Object

Unidentified Wookiee village (FAN-26)

• I think the Naboo should further be contextualised as a culture or race or whatever. The way the first sentence of the body is worded atm, I almost thought the village was associated with a human named Naboo.
• I think it should be clarified the PKN-49 worker droids were present in the village during the invasion―I doubt that there were consistently exactly eight PKN-49s constantly in the village at all times through its history. Fan26 (Talk) 18:36, 3 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Both done. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 13:30, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
    • It still says the "PKN-49 worker droids were present" without a timeframe given, which was what I was objecting to-not the specific number of droids Fan26 (Talk) 13:35, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
      • I've rephrased it so it sounds less time based. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 07:30, 19 August 2023 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Is the bts saying the village was identified left over from a different article? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 05:04, 24 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Removed Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:25, 25 September 2023 (UTC)

Panther

• Just want to confirm that the game provides the date for the invasion. Panther436 (talk) 21:52, 2 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Yes, it's established in the in-game DataBank. Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:14, 5 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 08:34, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

• No other relevant quotes available Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 09:13, 23 April 2023 (UTC)