Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Unidentified Gran guard

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Unidentified Gran guard

  • Nominated by: Stake black msg 13:29, 28 October 2025 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Word count at nomination time: 1176 words (122 introduction, 853 body, 201 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:VISIONS, WP:NOVELS

(2 Inqs/0 Users/2 Total)

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Support votes

  1. Inqvote CometSmudge (talk) 03:11, 20 November 2025 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 04:44, 21 December 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Comet
  • The last sentence of the first intro paragraph seems redundant, so I think it should be reworded or cut
  • The final bio section looks like it has room for an image, probably of the Ronin
  • I think the rest of the Traveler's quote could be used in the bio
  • I think you could mention the Traveler's response to the Gran, as well as when they warm the Ronin about him
  • I don't think we can duck test his hat as being a sedge hat, especially since it's different from the other designs labeled as sedge hats
  • The article says the Ronin gave the chief his own lightsaber's crystal, but he actually gives him Kouru's
  • Is the skirmish at Osou spaceport actually days later? I checked and it only seems to be a single day after CometSmudge (talk) 02:24, 14 November 2025 (UTC)
  • The Ronin needs context and linking in the intro
  • The infobox says he has dark hair, but the body doesn't give any hair color CometSmudge (talk) 02:37, 17 November 2025 (UTC)
    • Done. Stake black msg 11:02, 17 November 2025 (UTC)
      • The infobox says dark, but the body says black. It should be made consistent, and I don't think a specific color can really be listed since all the images are in black and white.
  • The Ronin being a former Sith isn't citable to "The Duel"
  • I think the timeline in A handsome bounty is still a bit off. The Ronin meets the Traveler the day after the skirmish, and they head to Osou together. Once they reach Osou, they split up, and that's when the Traveler encounters the Gran in the cantina. Then a few hours after they split up, the Traveler finds the Ronin again and warns him about the Gran. CometSmudge (talk) 19:43, 17 November 2025 (UTC)

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