Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Unidentified Alderaanian stormtrooper

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Unidentified Alderaanian stormtrooper

  • Nominated by: Cull Tremayne 05:59, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Stradley does know what he's doing sometimes.

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Pre-nom reviewed Toprawa and Ralltiir 06:35, 17 December 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 12:41, 11 January 2009 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Another case of "Topics that Wookieepedia has made far more interesting than they previously were." Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 06:30, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote As soon as this passes, LFL will come up with a name just so we don't have an unidentified FA. ;) — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 17:25, 19 January 2009 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Wookieepedia win, CUSWE and CSWE fail. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 18:53, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. From the desk of Atarumaster88
    • I can't believe I'm reading this, but here goes. Could you make the bolded title reflect the article's title more? Maybe something along the lines of "This stormtrooper from Alderaan.
      • Looks weird now with two links in the bolded title, but fixed.
    • " However, his detachment from the world kept him from taking any drastic measures" Is he referring to emotional detachment or a detachment of soldiers?
      • Added "emotional" to clarify.
    • "the two were unaware of the approaching native predators, the Rolk-mangir" How many of these creatures are there? This implies more than one, but that seems to contradict other parts of the article.
      • They were only directly attacked by one Rolk-mangir, but at least two ended up sneaking up on the two of them. Added a little clarification.
    • I know it's almost idiotic to ask this, but please contextify Calrissian and Skywalker. At least establish them as the Falcon's crew.
      • Done.
    • Marvelicious. If you keep this up, this guy will be named in the Newest, Bestest, Fattest, Most Updated Star Wars Encyclopedia. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 20:06, 15 January 2009 (UTC)
      • Thanks for the review. Cull Tremayne 06:02, 16 January 2009 (UTC)

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