Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/The Arena

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The Arena

  • Nominated by: MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 04:46, February 2, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Let's try this again.

(3 Inqs/5 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. OLIOSTER (talk) 17:07, February 2, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Appropriately technical and thorough. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 12:28, February 4, 2011 (UTC)
  3. I supported the GAN, and I see nothing to object to that would be anything more than a simple {{Sofixit}}. I should pass this onto my brother. He's studying music theory. Trak Nar Ramble on 04:35, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote—Tommy 9281 Tuesday, March 8, 2011, 22:45 UTC
  5. Hooray! Menkooroo 13:24, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
  6. More OOUs! Kilson 00:27, April 1, 2011 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:02, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
  8. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:53, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Object

  • You need not mention that the key of C is relative to A minor. It just clutters the sentence. NaruHina Talk Anakinsolo 05:45, February 4, 2011 (UTC)
Prepare to be savaged
  • The sheet music itself appears to be titled "The Arena." Should that be listed as an alternate title, then? ~ SavageBob 16:01, February 9, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • The Use section currently lists Movies before Soundtracks, which is not the order used in accordance with the infobox and per layout discussions.
    • Oops. idk why I hadn't changed that. :P Fixed. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 12:53, March 28, 2011 (UTC)
  • Are you sure the theme appears only in Star Wars Galaxies and not also in any of its expansion packs? Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:36, March 26, 2011 (UTC)
    • I'm not sure. I was told it was in Galaxies, but they didn't say anything about the expansion packs. I'll see what I can do. And sorry for the delay. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 12:48, March 28, 2011 (UTC)
      • If you want to get technical, it appears in all of them by virtue of being a part of An Empire Divided (the games initial release). Each expansion added a few new music pieces, but they also used the pool of music from the original release of the game. OLIOSTER (talk) 09:00, March 29, 2011 (UTC)
        • So, do I need to add the expansion packs to the "Use" section in the body and infobox? MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 13:27, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
Question
  • In "Anakin tames the Reek" --- "The low brass then play a near solo." Is it a soli? Should it be identified as such?
    • I looked into the term "soli" a little more. Turns out it's not exactly what I thought it was. I've reworded. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 17:14, March 30, 2011 (UTC)
  • Is a mention of the similarity to The Droid Invasion in order? Droid Invasion Theme mentions that they're similar, and the "Youmay" template here is a bit confusing --- there's nothing telling me just why I may be looking for The Droid Invasion. Menkooroo 06:55, March 29, 2011 (UTC)
    • I mentioned in the "Summary" section that the two were melodically similar. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 17:14, March 30, 2011 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review! MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 17:14, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 02:54, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

All objections should have been met excluding Tommy's Bts objection. Oli and Trak had supported the GAN. MasterFredCommerce Guild(Whatever) 04:46, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

  • I tweaked the image alignment in the "Anakin tames the Reek" section. If it wrecks the formatting, go ahead and revert. It just seemed a tad cramped on my screen. Trak Nar Ramble on 04:35, March 8, 2011 (UTC)
  • Given the fact the CT did not pass, What then of a BtS?—Tommy 9281 Tuesday, March 8, 2011, 18:00 UTC
    • Actually, the GAN rule tweak item passed. 1358 (Talk) 18:02, March 8, 2011 (UTC)