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Tepoh
- Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 14:46, 1 June 2023 (UTC) NBDani
(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 14:47, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Has been a pleasure working on this together!—spookywillowwtalk
- Date Archived: 14:03, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1397 words (249 introduction, 1067 body, 81 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELSWP:PRIDEWP:COLLAB
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Support
Great job on the collab! Lewisr (talk) 20:15, 9 July 2023 (UTC)- So cool to have a non-binary person with neopronouns in Star Wars! Panther436 (talk) 02:41, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
- snazzy OOM 224 (he/him) 15:29, 22 July 2023 (UTC)
- Fan26 (Talk) 01:38, 11 August 2023 (UTC)
Such a good read! Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 22:09, 22 September 2023 (UTC)
Squeaky clean, and thank you for this. Was a fun way to get more familiar with neopronouns! Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 10:19, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
- Booply (talk) 14:02, 21 October 2023 (UTC)
Object
Fan
Just wanted to confirm- Queen's Hope places Naboo in the Mid Rim Territories, so the beginning of the bio is correct in not having an extra ref note?- Addressed. Double checked and confirmed Naboo is referred to as a planet while I was at it. NBDani
(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 02:44, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed. Double checked and confirmed Naboo is referred to as a planet while I was at it. NBDani
In the second paragraph of "Meeting Saché" I think it should be specified that both Naboo and Karlinus are in the Chommell sector.Fan26 (Talk) 17:23, 5 June 2023 (UTC)- Addressed.—spookywillowwtalk 20:46, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
- Copy-edited it a bit, just wanna confirm 'tis good with y'all Fan26 (Talk) 01:04, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
- Looks good, thanks.—spookywillowwtalk 01:14, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
- Copy-edited it a bit, just wanna confirm 'tis good with y'all Fan26 (Talk) 01:04, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
- Addressed.—spookywillowwtalk 20:46, 6 June 2023 (UTC)
"that small companies that repurposed from the war" repurposed what?Fan26 (Talk) 03:13, 5 August 2023 (UTC)- Unsure, just says the companies themselves were repurposed a few times in the book. Reworded that sentence a bit to try to make it clearer to what the book reflects.—spookywillowwtalk 14:40, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
Lew
Is it possible to find a way to include Naboo (people) somewhere? Included in just the infobox for the momentLewisr (talk) 17:52, 8 July 2023 (UTC)- Added.—spookywillowwtalk 19:33, 9 July 2023 (UTC)
Panther
Is there no good picture of Saché? The latter sections of the biography could really use it if there is one.Panther436 (talk) 23:55, 11 July 2023 (UTC)- Spooky and I have discussed images and while Saché is relevant, we find it difficult to include a (blurry) picture of her as a Handmaiden or a picture of her much older, as both depictions are irrelevant to this timeframe. We also are struggling to justify any other image as most things relevant to Tepoh are only featured in QH's, without being pictured elsewhere. NBDani
(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 22:45, 12 July 2023 (UTC)
I don't see why an older picture of her wouldn't be relevant. It's still giving an accurate depiction of the character, and even if she didn't look exactly like that within the time frame of the article, it's still her. I've definitely seen it done before. I'll leave it up to you though. If you decide against it just let me know and I'll strike this.Panther436 (talk) 02:45, 13 July 2023 (UTC)- I think it's because of the significance of the gap; what we do have is much-later on comic depictions of her being something very different than anything she's like in the book. When writing the article, we both felt that including it would not fit within the article's context, and would rather leave it out.—spookywillowwtalk 15:35, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
- Spooky and I have discussed images and while Saché is relevant, we find it difficult to include a (blurry) picture of her as a Handmaiden or a picture of her much older, as both depictions are irrelevant to this timeframe. We also are struggling to justify any other image as most things relevant to Tepoh are only featured in QH's, without being pictured elsewhere. NBDani
Comments
- I would have recommended that perhaps a picture of datapad can be used in the article body, but seeing that you've already thought about image use and the fact that there are so many varying datapad designs, I suppose it's good not to force it if a good one cannot be found. OOM 224 (he/him) 15:29, 22 July 2023 (UTC)
- Just want to shoot a thanks to Panther and OOM. The discussion on images got Spooky and I talking about images again and we found a way to add another image. Further suggestions are always and forever welcomed. NBDani
(they/them)Yeager's Repairs 15:00, 2 August 2023 (UTC)
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 14:02, 21 October 2023 (UTC)