Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Tam's comlink

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Tam's comlink

  • Nominated by: Lewisr (talk) 04:06, 5 December 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 21:32, 25 December 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1120 words (113 introduction, 922 body, 85 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 1121 words (113 introduction, 923 body, 85 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:RESISTANCE

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 20:15, 7 December 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote OOM 224 (he/him/they) 21:57, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Wok142 (talk) 22:05, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Objection handled via Discord. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 05:51, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
  5. Booply (talk) 21:41, 23 December 2024 (UTC)
  6. Mor9347 ForPipadaLogo-UserImage (Talk) 13:20, 25 December 2024 (UTC)

Object

First Order Corporal
  • "While informing the pilot about her life before the First Order, Tierny opened a drawer on his desk and placed the device inside as Ryvora watched." Wrong pronoun for Tierny on the second part of the sentence. First Order Corporal 20First Order comms 12:02, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
    • Good spot thanks, not sure what happened there Lewisr (talk) 17:29, 8 December 2024 (UTC)
Wok
  • This part of the Serving a purpose section is confusing: "she was not sure how it would make Ryvora except reinforce she had made the right choice" - could you reword that bit?
    • Was just missing a word, how's that now? Lewisr (talk) 04:22, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
      • Cool. Made one more minor tweak there but looks good now. Wok142 (talk) 22:05, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
  • In Escaping the First Order, first sentence, I think it would read smoother if rearranged to say "after the native Aeosians had previously assisted the Colossus" Wok142 (talk) 23:44, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
    • Rearranged to follow Lewisr (talk) 04:22, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 21:31, 25 December 2024 (UTC)