Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Sister

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Sister

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 08:50, 18 November 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: New interviews found! Thrilled to take this to FAN
• Date Archived: 21:46, 28 December 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1437 words (98 introduction, 498 body, 841 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:PRIDEWP:WOMENWP:NOVELS

(4 Inqs/4 Users/8 Total)

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Support

1. Woohoo OOM 224 (he/him) 21:24, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
2. I would love for her to be in an episode of Tales of the Jedi or The Bad Batch Panther436 (talk) 22:27, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
3. Happy for you that you get to FAN her! Here's hoping for more Sister with all the prequel era content coming Lewisr (talk) 04:39, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
4. Lovely work as always, Spooky. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 08:13, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
5. Booply (talk) 22:11, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
6. Let's go girls. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 21:01, 28 December 2023 (UTC)
7. Learned via Discord my text settings are messed up. :p SHCosmos (He/Him, Talk) 21:42, 28 December 2023 (UTC)
8. Objections handled via Discord. Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 21:43, 28 December 2023 (UTC)

Object

OOM

• Love to see it progressing to a FAN. Just two things:
  • "When asked by Skywalker" — not clear as to what it was that he asked Sister.
  • "Sister was sent on an aid mission" — this works well, but it might be better to avoid passive voice. OOM 224 (he/him) 22:18, 30 November 2023 (UTC)
    • Should've gotten both, thanks.—spookywilloww^talk 20:32, 1 December 2023 (UTC)

Panther

• Love this, one minor thing: For the P&t section, it might be better to open with "as a Clone trooper" or "as a Clone of Jango Fett" because not all cloned people in general would have those traits Panther436 (talk) 18:56, 17 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Makes sense, swapped and thanks.—spookywilloww^talk 21:07, 17 December 2023 (UTC)

Editor

• Would you not say she was part of the 302nd Battalion? Its even listed on Skywalker's page.
• Intro should note she was sent on the aid mission as part of the 302nd (or "alongside" it if you don't want to say she was part of it).
  • To both above; I've been of the opinion that she's not part of the 302nd. Tweaked to add alongside to the intro to match the biography's avoidance of it. We do see a lot more of Skywalker comparatively so it makes sense to list him vs. this is only a brief cameo with not much context.—spookywilloww^talk 20:56, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
• We know from Brotherhood that Jedi ranks did not formally exist during the days of Queen's Hope. As such, Kenobi could not actually be a Jedi High General. It should be written as "informal Jedi General" with a citation to Brotherhood, Skywalker's commander rank would also be informal Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:28, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Swapped to Jedi ranks after Discord convo.—spookywilloww^talk 21:25, 27 December 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 21:43, 28 December 2023 (UTC)