Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Sirro Argonne

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Sirro Argonne

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:45, 24 March 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I'm fully burnt out on Rogue One, so time to draw this round of nominations to a close with one that I promised Spooky a long time ago
• Date Archived: 18:00, 6 July 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1103 words (143 introduction, 849 body, 111 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 1055 words (143 introduction, 825 body, 87 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. OOM 224 (he/him/they) 11:01, 13 June 2024 (UTC)
2. —spookywilloww^talk 11:21, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 03:14, 20 June 2024 (UTC)
4. Wok142 (talk) 23:54, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
5. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 04:38, 5 July 2024 (UTC)
6. Booply (talk) 17:59, 6 July 2024 (UTC)

Object

ThrawnChiss

• Should {{Video}} be used for the trailer? ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 12:23, 26 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Precedent is generally not to for trailers. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:48, 26 March 2024 (UTC)
• Minor nitpick, but we don't really know that his hair "turned" gray. How about "was" gray at the time of his death instead? ThrawnChiss7 ^{Assembly Cupola} 12:28, 26 March 2024 (UTC)
  • Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 13:48, 26 March 2024 (UTC)

spookly

• Mostly so I don't forget as well but putting a holding objection for the Pablo scientist naming tweet here as discussed prior.—spookywilloww^talk 04:23, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the reminder, sorted! Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:09, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
• I feel like it'd be better to establish upon the introduction of Tarkin Initiative that that division was managed by Krennic (which then implies that Argonne fell under his command, ultimately); makes it make more sense contextually when he's later executed by said superior.
  • Moved it up to the first mention, how's that? Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:00, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
    • Yep, works.—spookywilloww^talk 11:21, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
• I think the junior novel detail about (all of the team) being frail and unused to the outdoors would be nice for the PT since applicable to his physical form.
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:00, 19 June 2024 (UTC)
• More of a preference thing, but given he and his colleagues did work on kyber crystals as most of their work, the Star Wars: Absolutely Everything You Need to Know, Updated and Expanded bit about the logo featured on their uniforms being fractured kyber crystal inspired would be super easy to tuck in.—spookywilloww^talk 01:31, 28 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:00, 19 June 2024 (UTC)

Wok

• For the Equipment section, I feel that it would work fine all as one paragraph and probably look better as well. On the subject, are there general guidelines about avoiding short paragraphs like that if they are only like two sentences? Wok142 (talk) 06:33, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
  • I think either works, but have combined the paragraphs since you asked. I generally go more by how many rows of text they have and avoid two or one sentence paragraphs where possible, although I think keeping it flexible is important for things like image placement. Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:49, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
    • Cool, thanks. Yea that makes a lot of sense. Wok142 (talk) 23:54, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 18:00, 6 July 2024 (UTC)