- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Shahan Alama
- Nominated by: Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 15:24, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: recently bumped up to over 1,000 words with the TCWCE; big thanks to CC for the pre-nom review
(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
Pre-nom reviewed. CC7567 (talk) 00:39, July 12, 2010 (UTC)- JangFett (Talk) 22:09, July 12, 2010 (UTC)
- Very clean. Chack Jadson (Talk) 17:57, July 14, 2010 (UTC)
- JMAS
Hey, it's me! 02:17, July 15, 2010 (UTC) 
Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:06, July 21, 2010 (UTC)- — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 16:15, July 22, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Fett
"The crime lord had been placed in the Republic Judiciary Central Detention Center for his role in the kidnapping of his great-nephew, Rotta," Could you mention this eariler when you first mention Ziro? Possibly Bane being hired by the Hutts as well.- Moved.
- Great work! :) JangFett (Talk) 17:02, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks Jang! Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 18:42, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa
I would prefer to see the BTS briefly detail the source that first identified the character by name.Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:26, July 16, 2010 (UTC)- Added, and I've also rearranged the BTS to be (hopefully) a bit more coherent in general. How's it look? Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:35, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
- Looks good to me. Toprawa and Ralltiir 02:06, July 21, 2010 (UTC)
- Added, and I've also rearranged the BTS to be (hopefully) a bit more coherent in general. How's it look? Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 00:35, July 18, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 16:15, July 22, 2010 (UTC)