Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Servit

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Servit

• Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 01:27, 20 July 2022 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 06:48, 3 April 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1148 words (208 introduction, 898 body, 42 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 1155 words (211 introduction, 902 body, 42 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. Samonic 09:31, 23 July 2022 (UTC)
2. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 23:53, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
3. fab OOM 224 (he/him) 22:12, 20 March 2023 (UTC)
4. —spookywilloww^talk 20:25, 21 March 2023 (UTC)
5. AmazinglyCool (talk) 02:19, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
6. NotBoop (talk) 06:55, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
7. Dropbearemma (she/her) 05:09, 3 April 2023 (UTC)

Object

Samonic

• Do we have an article for the skirmish at Dex's Diner and the raid that killed Servit's diner? If yes, they should be linked, if not, I feel like they're notable enough to have pages. Samonic 16:10, 20 July 2022 (UTC)
  • I've made one for the raid on Shara'Tam, but I don't think the other one is notable. They just shoot at each other a bit. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 23:48, 21 July 2022 (UTC)

Braha

• I find it a bit weird that Shara'tam is contextualised as "moon" in the second instance rather than the first; it's like introducing the same thing twice. Can you revise this? Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 14:00, 14 February 2023 (UTC)
  • I did that because Servit doesn't know that it was specifically a moon until he hears Dex's version of the story. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 02:51, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
    • Ok I'm fine with that. Braha'tok enthusiast ^{Hello there} 23:53, 13 March 2023 (UTC)

Emma

• Maybe I'm just too tired to comprehend sentences, but what is the "instead" in "Servit tried to run away, asking advice instead from his friend Dexter Jettster" in the intro? If it were "Servit did not run away, asking advice instead" that would make sense, but I can't quite make sense of it as is. Dropbearemma (she/her) 11:17, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Does that make it clearer? JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 22:48, 2 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 06:48, 3 April 2023 (UTC)