- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Sei Taria
- Nominated by: Menkooroo 05:22, January 26, 2012 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Cloak of Deception is an excellent book.
(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)
Support
Clean as a whistle. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:47, February 2, 2012 (UTC)- Amazing! Plagueis327 03:09, February 2, 2012 (UTC)
- Almost as clean as a whistle. ;) —Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 01:18, February 8, 2012 (UTC) - I can't get the image of her hooking up with Valorum out of my head. *Shudder* Thanks, Menk! ~Savage
17:43, February 25, 2012 (UTC) - Looks good. <- Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 01:32, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 19:37, March 23, 2012 (UTC)- 1358 (Talk) 22:01, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
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Savaged…
"of whom she could sense the increasing power" reads oddly to me. Would "in whom she could sense increasing power" work? That's it! ~Savage 15:04, February 25, 2012 (UTC)- I like that suggestion. Changed, and thanks for taking a look. :) Menkooroo 17:36, February 25, 2012 (UTC)
Attack of the Clone
I understand why Valorum is listed as her master/"boss" in the infobox, but I'm still hesitant if that's the appropriate usage of it. Although I don't think this was codified in policy anywhere, the "masters" and "apprentices" infobox fields were intended for Force-sensitive relations, i.e. a Master and Padawan and not necessarily boss and employee. I'd advise removing it under these guidelines, but I'd like to check in with what you think.- I agree with you. I had a notion a couple of months ago that I should be more liberal with that field, but I've gotten over it. :P Changed.
For Fact File 65, is there a page number that can be listed (i.e. the "VOS7-8" in the Quinlan Vos entry in FF 103)?- Yes! Borsk gave me that info; I guess I forgot to add it in. Added now.
In the quote in "The Chancellor's fall," is "senate" supposed to be capitalized? It might be worth an [sic] (or maybe not) if it's not, but I wanted to check whether it was an error in the book or just a typo.- The text file I have with me has it lowercase, so I've added the sic. I have the Cloak of Deception paperback at home, which I can check to confirm in just over a week.
- Too bad Moore came into the picture. CC7567 (talk) 05:27, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! I kinda like Moore; hopefully we'll see her in TCW now that they have Umbaran character models. Menkooroo 15:31, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
Ecks Dee
In "Political ascent", I'm not really convinced that it's a good thing to link "several battles occurred" to three different articles — this is something we normally try to avoid. There also seems to be more than three battles during the Uprising, so it seems a little bit selective.- Good call. Links nixed.
"The Chancellor's fall": I'm not really sure how "the Flail" is supposed to be capitalized. Is "the" part of the title, and should it therefore be capitalized? The article on the organization seems to include the "the" yet it doesn't capitalize it. What does the source material say, and should the article be possibly moved (and the link be changed to not include "the")?1358 (Talk) 20:03, March 23, 2012 (UTC)- "Shadows of Coruscant" always includes a "the" in front of "Flail." It capitalizes "The" midsentence once, in the opening crawl, but writes "the Flail" on every other occasion. I think our article is OK. Thanks for taking a look. :) Menkooroo 20:42, March 23, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 22:01, March 30, 2012 (UTC)
- Plagueis spoilers are actually very minor. Menkooroo 05:22, January 26, 2012 (UTC)