Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Second Imperium

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Second Imperium

1. MyNz 20:35, 20 April 2006 (UTC)
2. SFH 04:35, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
3. --Eyrezer 10:13, 25 April 2006 (UTC)
4. Breathesgelatin 09:07, 18 May 2006 (UTC)
5. EAGLES610 01:41, 6 June 2006 (UTC)
6. Mirlen 00:57, 11 June 2006 (UTC)

Objections

• A little short don't you think? Also: No BTS (I know it's not a must but it could be a nice addition), and the intro is just one line! --UVnet 20:30, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
  • It has quite improved... a little clean up (better distribution of images) and a little thicker intro and it's there. Would also like to know where File:Brakiss newec.jpg came from. --UVnet 05:22, 16 May 2006 (UTC)

Comments

• I managed to improve it to a higher standard in one night. I think its good enough to be a featured article despite appearing only in the Young Jedi Knights series. Can someone also check the Shadow Academy and Diversity Alliance article? MyNz 20:35, 20 April 2006 (UTC)
  • The "Members" section seems to be screwed up somehow. StarNeptune^{Talk to me!} 04:28, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
    • I just fixed that. - Breathesgelatin 04:33, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
      • I think it is looking pretty good. Perhaps too many pics? --Eyrezer 10:13, 25 April 2006 (UTC)
        • Per UVnet (2nd comment) and Eyrezer. I don't think it's majorly due to the overload of images, just the distribution of it, as UVnet has stated. (Perhaps at least remove or move one of the images in the first section?) Otherwise, good job! —Mirlen 01:28, 23 May 2006 (UTC)
          • I reworte and changed layout of pics. Looks better now. --Eyrezer 23:02, 5 June 2006 (UTC)
            • I just tried to make the intro better, but I think I made it worse/too long. EAGLES610 01:55, 6 June 2006 (UTC)