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Second Battle of Jabiim (Clone Wars)
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- Yep, well, whoever you are, you're going to have to source the BTS. .... 13:08, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
- Well, that's easier said than done... I was the one who added the part with the Vietnam War, since that's what a lot of people I've been talking with have compared it to, but sourcing it... must fan speculation in BTS be sourced? Then I'll probably have to remove it. Any other comments? Evir Daal 13:15, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
- Surely this can be expanded much, much more. For all of the sources this appeared in and was mentioned in, how can sourcing only cover the four comics? That just seems ludicrous to me. Additionally, an aftermath or legacy section is sorely needed. This battle created a huge conflict in the GCW, and no mention is made of it with appropriate sourcing? Cull Tremayne 13:30, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
- Well, you see, in most of those sources it's only mentioned or appears very briefly, so it's hard to find relevant content from them. The Empire comics, though they don't have that much to do with it directly, are the weak point, since I don't have them. Could someone else maybe help me with that, please? Evir Daal 14:11, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
- The New Essential Guide to Droids has quite a bit surrounding the A-series assassin droid's role in the battle, though that doesn't seem to be sourced or mentioned. In quite a few other sources, there are mentions that the early battle is not going well, etc. However, there doesn't seem to be much info surrounding the early battle before Skywalker and Kenobi arrived. Stuff like that. Cull Tremayne 14:17, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
- I don't have the NEGD either... Since I obviously haven't done my homework on this one, could I withdraw it and try again later? Evir Daal 17:46, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
- The New Essential Guide to Droids has quite a bit surrounding the A-series assassin droid's role in the battle, though that doesn't seem to be sourced or mentioned. In quite a few other sources, there are mentions that the early battle is not going well, etc. However, there doesn't seem to be much info surrounding the early battle before Skywalker and Kenobi arrived. Stuff like that. Cull Tremayne 14:17, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
- Well, you see, in most of those sources it's only mentioned or appears very briefly, so it's hard to find relevant content from them. The Empire comics, though they don't have that much to do with it directly, are the weak point, since I don't have them. Could someone else maybe help me with that, please? Evir Daal 14:11, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
- Surely this can be expanded much, much more. For all of the sources this appeared in and was mentioned in, how can sourcing only cover the four comics? That just seems ludicrous to me. Additionally, an aftermath or legacy section is sorely needed. This battle created a huge conflict in the GCW, and no mention is made of it with appropriate sourcing? Cull Tremayne 13:30, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
- Well, that's easier said than done... I was the one who added the part with the Vietnam War, since that's what a lot of people I've been talking with have compared it to, but sourcing it... must fan speculation in BTS be sourced? Then I'll probably have to remove it. Any other comments? Evir Daal 13:15, 20 April 2007 (UTC)
- No mention of the Cestus Deception goof up. -- Ozzel 21:09, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
- Sourcing appears to be incomplete. No mention as to why Anakin was a 1st Lt. instead of a Commander. Atarumaster88 22:04, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
- Yeah, you can withdraw it if you like. Cull Tremayne 22:08, 21 April 2007 (UTC)
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