Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Rokrul

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Rokrul

  • Nominated by: Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 05:44, 24 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Turns out this one needed some upgrades that put it over the word limit.
  • Date Archived: 04:07, 30 May 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1063 words (209 introduction, 764 body, 90 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 1052 words (210 introduction, 752 body, 90 behind the scenes)
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Support

  1. Inqvote (assuming below addressed) had a real flashback about traditional-ity-roles while reviewing this brrrr —spookywillowwtalk 21:32, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 21:07, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 22:02, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote For a change I wasn't staying up late but still couldn't sleep, so I'm reviewing FANs Fan26 (Talk) 07:24, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
  5. Booply (talk) 20:00, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Supreme Emperor Holocomm 04:02, 30 May 2024 (UTC)

Object

Tommy
  • Very nice, just two small things. In the infobox, you say the climate was "Mild (before and after Techno Union invasion)". However, in the body, the pre-TU temperature is said to be "warm," so I think those ought to be made consistent. Additionally, the body doesn't mention that the village's temperature returned to normal after the base was destroyed, so I'd like to see this mentioned in the body too. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 12:34, 16 March 2024 (UTC)
    • I'll actually need to check to make sure we can confirm the village returns to warm after the TU's defeat. Will check and follow-up. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 16:25, 20 March 2024 (UTC)
    • Found the word "warm" in CSWE, which confirmed that it returned to that state after Skywalker destroyed the base. Updated accordingly. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 04:40, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
ThrawnChiss
  • I think it's worth adding the dates of the Clone Wars in the body. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 23:01, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
    • Added.
  • The New Essential Chronology surely supports Anakin's and Obi-Wan's titles and Anakin's pronouns, so referencing to ROTS is not needed. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 23:01, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
    • Indeed it does, so all fixed. Digging into this also allowed me to clean up Kenobi's article and cite his ascension to Master, which has bothered me for years at this point, so hooray for that. :D Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 23:49, 30 April 2024 (UTC)
SE
  • "As all members of a tribe shared communal duties, every member participating in the rituals for their gender, there was no special test that an elder had to pass in order to become chief." This sentence is a bit clunky, can you reword it or break it in two? Supreme Emperor Holocomm 02:00, 21 May 2024 (UTC)
    • I feel splitting the sentence would make it even clunkier. It's all one thought. The reason there was no test for chief is because every member of the tribe was expected to carry their weight, but the nature of that weight was also assigned along gender lines. I did a slight tweak to hopefully better connect the first two clauses, though. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 04:11, 21 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 04:07, 30 May 2024 (UTC)