- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Rokko
- Nominated by: Chack Jadson (Talk) 22:26, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: We don't have many Hutt FAs, do we? Plus, it's almost my second anniversary here, so I'm celebrating that.
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Support
- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:58, 29 September 2008 (UTC)- Short and sweet. Cull Tremayne 01:30, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- Lord Hydronium 18:20, 16 October 2008 (UTC)
Greyman(Talk) 09:27, 20 October 2008 (UTC)- -- Darth Culator (Talk) 01:48, 21 October 2008 (UTC)
Object
Unsourced quote. Also what about a lead quote? --Eyrezer 02:05, 21 September 2008 (UTC)- Sourced. And there was a lead quote, but I screwed up the formatting so that it didn't show up. It's there now. Chack Jadson (Talk) 12:46, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
Can we subsection the bio to get a table of contents? Also, "male Hutt" ... nuh-uh :P -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:08, 21 September 2008 (UTC)- Fixed the sex thing. I would subsection it, but because of the way the Bio is set up, I don't think it would look good. Rokko's got an unbalanced life; we know almost nothing about him before he meets Pavan, so dividing it like that probably wouldn't be good, and setting it up with the Chryyk stuff as the end of one and the Bug-Eyes as the start of the other wouldn't look great, IMO. If you disagree, just say so, and I'll try my best to get it sub-sectioned. Chack Jadson (Talk) 18:57, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- Actually, I just sub-sectioned it. Tell me what you think. I prefer it the other way, but it's your call. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:04, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
- Fixed the sex thing. I would subsection it, but because of the way the Bio is set up, I don't think it would look good. Rokko's got an unbalanced life; we know almost nothing about him before he meets Pavan, so dividing it like that probably wouldn't be good, and setting it up with the Chryyk stuff as the end of one and the Bug-Eyes as the start of the other wouldn't look great, IMO. If you disagree, just say so, and I'll try my best to get it sub-sectioned. Chack Jadson (Talk) 18:57, 21 September 2008 (UTC)
No mention of Rokko at all in Streets of Shadow?- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:10, 25 September 2008 (UTC)- None that I could find in my two look-throughs. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:00, 28 September 2008 (UTC)
"Rokko the Hutt was, like most of his kind, greedy, with love only for money." Is "like most of his kind" from the source? It seems pretty POV.- Lord Hydronium 15:31, 13 October 2008 (UTC)- Removed the "most of his kind." I left in how he was a merciless, greedy being however, as the book clearly establishes that part of his personality, just for anyone wondering. Chack Jadson (Talk) 00:50, 16 October 2008 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 18:29, 22 October 2008 (UTC)
- Thank you for reading this. Chack Jadson (Talk) 19:49, 21 October 2008 (UTC)