Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Purrgil Ultra

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Purrgil Ultra

  • Nominated by: CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 23:21, 4 November 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments:
  • Date Archived: 20:58, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 963 words (146 introduction, 730 body, 87 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 966 words (147 introduction, 733 body, 86 behind the scenes)
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(4 Inqs/0 Users/4 Total)

(Votes required: Additional 2 user or 1 Inq vote required to pass.)

Support

  1. Inqvote OOM 224 (he/him) 15:13, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 04:01, 6 April 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 03:53, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 05:00, 9 April 2024 (UTC)

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Lew
  • The "Search for Thrawn" section could use some sectioning Lewisr (talk) 04:55, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Added two headings, let me know if you're happy with them or would like to see a different approach. CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 18:06, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
      • Is it possible to maybe get it 2 paragraphs per heading? It would look a bit better layout wise Lewisr (talk) 05:25, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
        • I get that, I just thought it fits better like that. I moved the second heading to the section above, let me know what you think about that. CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 23:58, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
          • Fair, though it looks much better now thanks Lewisr (talk) 02:26, 12 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Sabine Wren, World Between Worlds, and Jedi Archives could use context Lewisr (talk) 04:55, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Added, thanks. CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 18:06, 7 December 2023 (UTC)
      • Coruscant needs some now Lewisr (talk) 05:25, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
        • How deep can this nesting get? :P CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 23:58, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
  • I think there's a fair bit of underlinking in the Ahsoka events, Sabine Wren, History of the Galaxy, Parts One, Two and Three, Hyperspace transport ring for example Lewisr (talk) 04:55, 6 December 2023 (UTC)
    • No idea how I missed those, thanks. CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 01:16, 8 December 2023 (UTC)
OOM
  • My copy-edit here. I think the "class" infobox field should just list purrgil instead, since that is the more immediate and important information for readers regarding this one's biology. Plus, "whale" in the real-world is an informal grouping (I learnt this recently).
    • Thanks. But can we do this if purrgil are never specified as a real "class" in Star Wars? CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 21:39, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Hmm, good point. I suppose it wouldn't be really accurate to call it a "classification." Maybe, since purrgil were a species classified as whales, it would be better to do "Whale (purrgil)" instead? OOM 224 (he/him) 23:13, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
        • Sounds good to me, changed to that. CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 15:05, 30 January 2024 (UTC)
  • A bit of a strange request, but do they make noises? If so, then I think it's worth a mention.
  • I don't think you should specify that Vizago was a Devaronian, since that introduces a consistency issue about other individuals' species not being mentioned.
  • The first sentence of the "Skirmish on Seatos" is a bit of a run-on and should be split up/re-arranged, as you see fit.
  • There's a bit too much context in the second paragraph here. All it needs to address is that Sabine was persuaded to hand over the map to Baylan, Baylan destroyed the map, Sabine was taken aboard the Eye of Sion, and that the ring jumped into hyperspace despite the New Republic's efforts. Details about the reflex point and the duel aren't relevant for how the Purrgil Ultra got involved.
    • Shortened, let me know if you're happy with it. CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 21:39, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Did Ahsoka travel inside a Purrgil Ultra or a regular purrgil. The article isn't really clear.
  • Looking at similar concept design text on the FA Lotho Minor, I don't think the "a concept designer for Lucasfilm Animation between 2015 and 2018" part is necessary. OOM 224 (he/him) 19:31, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
  • Location context for the Jedi Temple would be good. OOM 224 (he/him) 23:13, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
ThrawnChiss
  • You should specify when the episode guide was released. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 03:31, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
    • Do we have release dates of the episode guides? CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 14:07, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
      • I'm not sure, but you can use archive dates to say it was released "by" a certain time, like Magaloof. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 14:11, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
        • Ok thanks, added the earliest date I could find. CanePlayz Jedi symbol (Talk) 17:01, 22 February 2024 (UTC)
Dani

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