Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Prie

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Prie

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 02:45, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: "Oh this is just a CA update it'll take 10 minutes—" - famous last words.
  • Date Archived: 08:28, 24 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1395 words (279 introduction, 1089 body, 27 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 1394 words (279 introduction, 1088 body, 27 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELS WP:Women

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Support

  1. I really liked Padawan. SilverSunbird (talk) 03:13, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
  2. <-Omicron(Leave a message at the BEEP!) 22:22, 4 January 2023 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:39, 6 March 2023 (UTC)
  4. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 08:14, 27 March 2023 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 00:55, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
  6. AmazinglyCool Nightsisters symbol - JFO (talk) 03:15, 21 April 2023 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Ayrehead02 (talk) 08:27, 24 April 2023 (UTC)

Object

Silver
  • Bolla Ropal's last name needs to be used after his first mention, which means you'll have to add a source (maybe "Cargo of Doom") for his full name since it isn't mentioned in Padawan. SilverSunbird (talk) 03:00, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
    • Altered. Did spot that when writing but was trying to avoid that in honesty as it seems to fit quite awkwardly in the novel's context, but you're right that precedent requires it.—spookywillowwtalk 03:09, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
      • I'm honestly not fond of using last names either, but them's the rules. SilverSunbird (talk) 03:13, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
Samonic
  • Intro: "Not long after, she shared another meal with her peers in the dining hall and discussed the argument that Kenobi's Master, Qui-Gon Jinn, had with the Jedi High Council. " You don't introduce the argument prior to that sentence, so I believe the following. 1. If Jinn had many arguments, you should say "arguments." 2. If Jinn had a single argument, you should just say "an argument." Additionally, you later establish that the Jedi Master could have left the order, so you should probably establish that the argument(s) could have prompted Jinn to leave the Jedi Order.
    • In relation to what Prie was informed of, it was a singular argument that she knew of and passed on knowledge of to Kenobi and her friends. I hesitate to change it to "an argument" because that still implies there were several arguments that Prie knew of, when knowledge of just the one is confirmed. Jinn hadn't been seriously considering leaving, it was more the Padawans considering that as a possibility themselves, and so tweaked it to reflect it as a thought of Prie's.—spookywillowwtalk 17:42, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
      • That will suffice, thank you. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 20:09, 10 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Is the large horned beast notable enough for a page? Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 17:01, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
    • I did consider that—it's unfortunately only briefly mentioned in a sentence within Kenobi's internal thoughts. The main reason it was worked into both the intro/body was because it's the only part from 40 BBY. I'm open to other arguments, but am mostly of the thought that it's not notable enough from when it was being discussed as a CA.—spookywillowwtalk 17:42, 6 November 2022 (UTC)

Comments

  • Used pretty much every scrap of dialogue she had that was quote-worthy, and some sections had none that would fit.—spookywillowwtalk 02:46, 6 November 2022 (UTC)
  • Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 08:27, 24 April 2023 (UTC)