- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Plett
(5 Inq/2 User/7 Total)
Support
Plat Mallar. Graestan(Talk) 03:54, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
No plates. Bowls. Master Aban Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 00:26, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
I always enjoy reading your articles, Ey. Nice job. Greyman@wikiajanitor(Talk) 22:41, 16 May 2008 (UTC)- Goodwood
(Alliance Intelligence) 22:49, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
HUZZAH Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:55, 18 May 2008 (UTC)
Very nice. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:21, 19 May 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- Grass clippings:
File:PlettsHouse-TEGtPaM.png has visible frame."Jedi students from the Jedi Temple" is a bit awkward."Jedi refugees from the Jedi Temple" is, also.Linking could use a touch-up; noticed a lot of good possibles. Just a thought; I don't want you to link [[water]] or anything silly like that.- Excellent article. I loved it. Except the Y-wings part; everyone knows that Y-wings are junk. Graestan(Talk) 00:50, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
- From the Forest of Goodwood:
A link to battlemoon might be desirable both in the introduction and body, but it's up to you.- That link is not to a generic class, but to the specific battlemoon of Varn...
- Fair enough.--Goodwood
(Alliance Intelligence) 14:07, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
- Fair enough.--Goodwood
- That link is not to a generic class, but to the specific battlemoon of Varn...
"they did foil an attempt by Roganda Ismaren, another of the original children" -- You already mention Roganda, so this sentence should probably be amended.- Done
- Thank you sir.
- Done
- Good article!--Goodwood
(Alliance Intelligence) 07:23, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
- From the Merciless Hammer of Toprawa:
This sentence beginning the Powers section and the last sentence ending the Personality section both begin the exact same. Please reword to mix it up a little bit: "As a Jedi Master, Plett was proficient in diverse Jedi arts."The Powers section becomes a bit rough to read with the way sentences constantly begin with "He was able, Plett was also, Plett was also, Plett was able, etc." Please mix it up a little bit.Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:27, 17 May 2008 (UTC)- Both should now be resolved. --Eyrezer 03:26, 18 May 2008 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 17:58, 20 May 2008 (UTC)
- Higher quality images on their way... --Eyrezer 09:43, 13 May 2008 (UTC)