Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Plett

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Plett

  • Nominated by: Eyrezer 09:42, 13 May 2008 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Piett, Plett, Platt, Plate?

(5 Inq/2 User/7 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Plat Mallar. Graestan(Talk) 03:54, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote No plates. Bowls. Master Aban Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 00:26, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote I always enjoy reading your articles, Ey. Nice job. Greyman@wikiajanitor(Talk) 22:41, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
  4. Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 22:49, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote HUZZAH Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:55, 18 May 2008 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Very nice. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:21, 19 May 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. Grass clippings:
    • File:PlettsHouse-TEGtPaM.png has visible frame.
    • "Jedi students from the Jedi Temple" is a bit awkward.
    • "Jedi refugees from the Jedi Temple" is, also.
    • Linking could use a touch-up; noticed a lot of good possibles. Just a thought; I don't want you to link [[water]] or anything silly like that.
    • Excellent article. I loved it. Except the Y-wings part; everyone knows that Y-wings are junk. Graestan(Talk) 00:50, 14 May 2008 (UTC)
  2. From the Forest of Goodwood:
    • A link to battlemoon might be desirable both in the introduction and body, but it's up to you.
      • That link is not to a generic class, but to the specific battlemoon of Varn...
        • Fair enough.--Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 14:07, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
    • "they did foil an attempt by Roganda Ismaren, another of the original children" -- You already mention Roganda, so this sentence should probably be amended.
      • Done
        • Thank you sir.
    • Good article!--Goodwood Redstarbird (Alliance Intelligence) 07:23, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
  3. From the Merciless Hammer of Toprawa:
    • This sentence beginning the Powers section and the last sentence ending the Personality section both begin the exact same. Please reword to mix it up a little bit: "As a Jedi Master, Plett was proficient in diverse Jedi arts."
    • The Powers section becomes a bit rough to read with the way sentences constantly begin with "He was able, Plett was also, Plett was also, Plett was able, etc." Please mix it up a little bit. Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:27, 17 May 2008 (UTC)
      • Both should now be resolved. --Eyrezer 03:26, 18 May 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 17:58, 20 May 2008 (UTC)

  • Higher quality images on their way... --Eyrezer 09:43, 13 May 2008 (UTC)