Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Pav-ti Tano (second nomination)

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Pav-ti Tano

  • Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 06:53, 23 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Technically a second nom because I didn't know about the FAN limits previously
  • Date Archived: 04:55, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1344 words (159 introduction, 890 body, 295 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 1165 words (135 introduction, 793 body, 237 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:TCW

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Support

  1. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 01:46, 19 November 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Good read, nice work. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 21:24, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 23:29, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 10:04, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
  5. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 03:48, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
  6. Booply (talk) 04:54, 26 November 2024 (UTC)

Object

Thrawn
  • The infobox states her homeworld was Shili or she was "from" it, but the body only states she was "living" there during the events of Tales of the Jedi. ThrawnChiss7 Mitth symbol Assembly Cupola 18:12, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Should be corrected. Wok142 (talk) 18:40, 25 September 2024 (UTC)
Lew
  • I don't think the episode identifies Shili as a planet Lewisr (talk) 22:55, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Timelines dates Ahsoka being discovered by Plo Koon to 33 BBY Lewisr (talk) 22:55, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Handled the above, will work on the below later. Wok142 (talk) 20:57, 28 September 2024 (UTC)
  • I think the mention of Ahsoka's parents in the Ahsoka novel is relevant to note Lewisr (talk) 22:55, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
  • The BTS should include that she was first imo'ed in the Ahsoka novel, and that Pav-ti was identified as such in the panel article and then by her surname in Ahsoka's databank Lewisr (talk) 22:55, 27 September 2024 (UTC)
    • Worked that all in, is that satisfactory? Wok142 (talk) 05:07, 29 September 2024 (UTC)
      • The novel should include the author, and a date for the SW.com Celebration article should be included. Would like to see just a bit more added onto the part in the biography about the conversation between Ahsoka and Kaeden Lewisr (talk) 17:23, 9 October 2024 (UTC)
        • Authored, dated, and expanded. Wok142 (talk) 23:00, 9 October 2024 (UTC)
  • The air date for "Escape from Kadavo" should be put Lewisr (talk) 04:11, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
    • Slid that in. Wok142 (talk) 05:12, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
spookly
  • Technically, I think by virtue of it not being linked elsewhere, Tano family is intro-exclusive.
  • Intro should have some BBY dating per precedent, since its available.—spookywillowwtalk 17:34, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
    • Slid in family and added a date. Wok142 (talk) 17:25, 5 November 2024 (UTC)
  • Really the most minor of things, but not familiar enough with this particular short to say. The partners field documentation has that anything in that field should have a specifying {{C}}; is this more of a romantic partner situation or a co-parent one? (As there's examples of both being used in various sources for co-parents existing together within a family, depending on context)
    • They definitely seem committed to each other beyond just co-parenting. Added "romantic partner" there. Wok142 (talk) 20:22, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
  • Briefly noticed that say, the PT image caption uses past tense, whereas the rest use present tense. I do kinda think it'd be more consistent if they were all in past tense; usually, present tense captions are ones that're not full sentences and thus describing actions. But either way, these should pick one way and make consistent throughout.—spookywillowwtalk 19:10, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
    • Fair point. I've made it consistent. Wok142 (talk) 20:22, 18 November 2024 (UTC)
Tommy
  • I think the fact that Ahsoka was taken from Pav-ti should be mentioned in the intro.
  • I think we could mention that Pav-ti had montrals. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 17:38, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
    • Mentioned both. Wok142 (talk) 19:48, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
Macaroni
  • Images in three consecutive paragraphs is a bit much, I'd recommend choosing two of them (with an image-less paragraph in between) and then bumping their sizes up. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 12:47, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
    • Removed one and bumped sizes. Wok142 (talk) 05:48, 25 November 2024 (UTC)
Soc0oriprmee22
  • Could "The hunt" be subdivided? The section is relatively long compared to "Motherhood." If nothing else, it may be worth moving the last paragraph of post-Tales of the Jedi events to its own section, which would also allow another quote. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 00:04, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 04:55, 26 November 2024 (UTC)