Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Padmé Amidala/Legends (second nomination)

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Padmé Amidala

  1. AngelQueen 21:44, 8 Jan 2006 (UTC)
  2. Comedy240 20:28, 9 Jan 2006 (UTC)
  3. Palpy 16:02, 14 Jan 2006 (UTC)
  4. Divinity 05:08, 1 February 2006 (UTC)
  5. DarkTrooper14 19:51, 17 February 2006 (UTC)
  6. Becd22 22:47, 23 February 2006 (UTC)

Objections

  • The section "Queen (32 BBY–24 BBY)" is rather confusing. It is hard to understand how the political events (blockade, battle, Palpatine's election) correlate with each other and with Padme forging a friendship with Anakin. And I think at least some details on their meeting on Tatooine should be given. - Sikon [Talk] 06:44, 13 Jan 2006 (UTC)
    • The section has been worked with and modified appropriately. --AngelQueen 17:51, 15 Jan 2006 (UTC)
  • It needs an overall expansion, as well as a good cleanup of excessive links. --Imp 01:03, 21 January 2006 (UTC)
    • The links have been cleaned up. --AngelQueen 04:54, 21 January 2006 (UTC)

Comments

  • I think that this article would be a good featured article. The biography is detailed and well-written. Perhaps the only thing that needs worked on is the introduction, as it is a little short. --AngelQueen 21:44, 8 Jan 2006 (UTC)