- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Orley Vanicus
- Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:20, 17 September 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)
Support
- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 11:25, 18 September 2008 (UTC)- No complaints from this guy. Greyman(Talk) 12:57, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
- Graestan(Talk) 22:47, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
I was waiting for someone to tackle this guy. This is also assuming that wikia will fix the quotes. Cull Tremayne 03:53, 8 October 2008 (UTC)- Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 18:24, 8 October 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- From the squadron briefing of Cavalier One:
A little context on why Qel-Droma was leading pirates and turned to the Sith would be appreciated. The article goes from him as Jedi aiding the Republic to a Jedi against the Republic with no explanation.- Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:16, 18 September 2008 (UTC)- Added a tiny bit. Let me know if you'd like more. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 10:52, 18 September 2008 (UTC)
- From Graestan the Cruel:
"Hero" is a bit POV.- Added "was considered" to the relevant entries, though I really would rather not.
"good at" is, also, sadly.- Changed it to "specialized at." Does that work?
Ulic's switching of sides should be mentioned in the intro, for context.- Done.
Kun killed Vodo; please clarify in the intro.- Good spot.
I know you'll get better scans in coming months, but in the meantime File:Vanicus at Foerost.jpg and File:Vanicus at Onderon.jpg have visible frame that should be cropped out.- I've asked Redemption for rescans though I'm not sure what his status is these days in terms of activity. In the meantime I've cropped those two better.
Was it really the bulk of the Republic Navy Vanicus sent to Kemplex IX? Does the cited source state it, or does another?- Netus says the "main Republic fleet," so I'm not sure if that qualifies, really. I can change it if you wish.
- Graestan(Talk) 23:05, 30 September 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 12:27, 1 October 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 18:24, 8 October 2008 (UTC)