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Ooroo
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dmirableAckbar (It's A Trap!) 21:21, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
Thefourdotelipsis 12:58, 20 September 2007 (UTC)- Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 15:08, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
- Chack Jadson Talk 19:45, 22 September 2007 (UTC)
Graestan (This party's over) 01:19, 26 September 2007 (UTC)
Yay for Master Brain-Squid-In-A-Jar! -- Darth Culator (Talk) 15:53, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
Cull Tremayne 18:27, 30 September 2007 (UTC)
Greyman(Paratus) 04:30, 2 October 2007 (UTC)
Oppose
"Siths." Also, it says that he didnt' want to make history, rather, he wanted to make history. This make-a no sense. Thefourdotelipsis 08:07, 20 September 2007 (UTC)- Both fixed. --
dmirableAckbar (It's A Trap!) 12:31, 20 September 2007 (UTC)
- Both fixed. --
Some sentences have two references, such as "Ooroo generally spoke basic", and things in the BTS. Is this necessary? Chack Jadson Talk 02:05, 21 September 2007 (UTC)- I guess not. Fixed --
dmirableAckbar (It's A Trap!) 07:14, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
- I guess not. Fixed --
- From the lair of Hobbes15
In Battle of Kirrek, "reigned down on the capital" does not make sense.- Addressed.
In the Legacy section, the part about the pirates and rebels being granted amnesty should not be in the same sentence as Odan-Urr's grief for Ooroo. Reword this somehow.- Addressed.
- That's all. Good story. Hobbes15(Tiger Headquarters) 14:57, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
- Thank you for your comments and input -- AdmirableAckbar [Talk] 15:16, 25 September 2007 (UTC)
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