Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ohwun De Maal

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Ohwun De Maal

  • Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 14:14, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Those spacesuits really are veterans of the TV and film industry
  • Date Archived: 16:35, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1182 words (134 introduction, 355 body, 693 behind the scenes)
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(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. Inqvote I love being able to find everyone in the cantina thanks to you Ayre:P Lewisr (talk) 04:06, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote LucaRoR (Talk) 14:27, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:47, 14 September 2023 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 03:43, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
  5. Fan26 (Talk) 18:21, 6 October 2023 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:34, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Object

Anil
  • (Reviewing note) This was a great read from start to finish, especially its extensive BTS! Just two quick notes about my copy-edit:
    • To get rid of a few extra citations, I've sourced Ohwun's gender directly to his Force Collection card as the card's "type" field identifies him as male.
    • There are three more textless cards for Ohwun in Card Trader, which don't have to be listed in Sources per precedent, but I went ahead and added only one of them since that one features original artwork that's also used in the article. (also confirmed its release date)
  • I don't think the Ohwun mini bust is out yet as it's still listed as a pre-order product. If that's the case, the description text about the name "Ellorrs Madak" is only available on that product page at the moment. Could you please revise BTS accordingly? The current wording suggests the name is present on a released product. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 01:48, 30 September 2023 (UTC)
    • CHanged the wording to reflect this, although seems like I'll need to change it back any day now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:38, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 16:34, 16 October 2023 (UTC)