Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Nial Declann

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Nial Declann

• Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 13:16, April 13, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Let's see if this still works.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(We seed the stars)} 01:36, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
2. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 12:30, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
3. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 01:10, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
4. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:30, April 15, 2010 (UTC)
5. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 14:21, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
6. Imperialles 04:47, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Just one: in the intro, you say Declann had "a stint on Naboo assigning tasks to spacers" but in the bio you only refer to one spacer. Which is correct? Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(We seed the stars)} 01:15, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
   • Opted for spacer. Thefourdotelipsis 01:31, April 14, 2010 (UTC)
2. BTS: "His appearance is also considerably different—he is shown to have considerably lighter skin". Maybe reword one of those considerablys. --Imperialles 16:05, April 19, 2010 (UTC)
   • Tweaked. Thefourdotelipsis 23:38, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

• Sorry if it's a bit sloppy in the formatting department. It's been a while. Thefourdotelipsis 13:16, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 14:33, April 20, 2010 (UTC)