Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Moltok/Legends

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Moltok

(6 Inqs/1 User/7 Total)

Support

  1. --Eyrezer 03:12, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Heh, nice job on making me pull out GG4 to double check the government name :P Greyman Jan.png (Talk) 23:17, 24 April 2008 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Graestan(Talk) 01:15, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Cull Tremayne 09:23, 25 April 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Imperialles 23:47, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote -- Darth Culator (Talk) 23:59, 29 April 2008 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Doo eeet! Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:11, 2 May 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. From the Merciless Hammer of Toprawa:
    • I really hate to hold this up on an objection like this since Rebellion is so obscure among us, but considering that an image does exist for the infobox, and a pretty darn good one at that, this article needs this image before passing. Like I said, I'll do my darnedest to get it.
    • The opening quote seems to be a poem. Can you specify this in the attribution line?
      • Baji speaks in rhyme in his everyday speech. This is a religious tradition on the planet, but something more appropriate for the Ho'Din page itself. --Eyrezer 21:20, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
    • Is there any thing at all you could add to the third "paragraph" of the "Description" section, or otherwise tack it on to the end of another paragraph so as to avoid the one-sentence paragraph?
      • Attached to first para. --Eyrezer 21:26, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
    • Despite this sentence, you never make a subsequent mention of this second species besides the Ho'Din in this section: "Two reptilian sentient species evolved on Moltok." Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:59, 27 April 2008 (UTC)
      • Addressed. --Eyrezer 21:26, 27 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 03:11, 2 May 2008 (UTC)

  • Star Wars: Rebellion has an image of the planet, but I don't own the game... if anyone can supply the pic that would be greatly appreciated. --Eyrezer 04:01, 25 April 2008 (UTC)