Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mission to Vassek's third moon

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Mission to Vassek's third moon

• Nominated by: CC7567 ^(talk) 08:03, 8 July 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Conclusion of Capture of the Wealthworm, but the article's awkwardly long name is attributed to the pursuit for "factual correctness".

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Good work.--Kreivi Wolter 18:58, 15 July 2009 (UTC)
2. Jedi Kasra (talk) 22:40, September 16, 2009 (UTC)
3. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 21:57, December 16, 2009 (UTC)
4. IFYLOFD ^{(You will pay the price for your lack of vision!)} 03:23, December 20, 2009 (UTC)
5. Nice work. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 22:15, December 22, 2009 (UTC)
6. --Eyrezer 01:15, December 27, 2009 (UTC)
7. --Darth Culator ^(Talk) 05:47, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. When is Nahdar refered to as a general? Darth Trayus ^{(Trayus Academy)} 22:06, 14 July 2009 (UTC)
   • Ugh, this debate again. I'll just remove it to stop assuming. CC7567 ^(talk) 23:54, 14 July 2009 (UTC)
     • Not really a matter of debate. More a matter of accuracy, as he has never been referred to as such, and not every Knight and master became a general. Darth Trayus ^{(Trayus Academy)} 21:00, 16 July 2009 (UTC)
2. Apparently, Path of the Jedi depicts another version of the mission, which involves Skywalker, Tano or Yoda being sent to Vassek to assisst Fisto. While obviously non-canon since it contradicts the episode, you may want to add the game's storyline to the Bts. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 13:45, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
   • Eh, didn't like that game, but addressed. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:20, 7 August 2009 (UTC)
3. One minor objection: It isn't very clear what the "deception" is, because it's not very clear that the Jedi were unaware that Gunray was there only via hologram. "…the Jedi and clones overheard a hologram of Gunray giving orders to a squad of B1 battle droids from behind a high-backed chair. Unaware of Gunray's deception, Fisto and Vebb led the attack on the droids, and were able to eliminate their opponents." Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 16:22, December 22, 2009 (UTC)
   • Addressed; thanks for the review. :) CC7567 ^(talk) 22:13, December 22, 2009 (UTC)
4. Eyrezer: Just one point: In the Aftermath section you mention Vebb's "hate-driven" actions, yet it the sections above give little indication of this hate. Can you harmonise the two parts, giving some more context on why Vebb was "hate-driven"? Apart from this, very nice. --Eyrezer 00:19, December 27, 2009 (UTC)
   • Adjusted. Thanks for the review. CC7567 ^(talk) 00:54, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

• Couldn't the article's title be changed to something like "Mission to Vassek's third moon", or something?--Jedi Kasra (talk) 17:20, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
  • It could, yes. CC7567 ^(talk) 17:22, September 10, 2009 (UTC)
    • I guess I'll bring up the issue on the article's talk page.--Jedi Kasra (talk) 21:56, September 16, 2009 (UTC)
      • If it honestly matters that much to you, then I'll change it, but changing the article's name is not worth a poll. CC7567 ^(talk) 22:12, September 16, 2009 (UTC)
• To clear up whether Nahdar was a Jedi General or not... the Episode Guide states "...He spots a Republic attack shuttle parked nearby, and the goggle-eyed Mon Calamari Jedi Knight, Nahdar Vebb is conferring with his clone troops." Vebb was conferring with his clone troops. If he wasn't a general, they wouldn't be his clone troopers. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 14:14, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
  • He could be a commander or lieutenant for all we know. The point? We just don't know. CC7567 ^(talk) 21:36, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
    • I thought the rule was that if a Jedi had any rank at all in the GAR, padawans were commanders and knights and masters were generals? -LtNOWIS 23:43, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
    • That is what I thought as well. - JMAS ^{Hey, it's me!} 23:46, December 15, 2009 (UTC)
      • Yes, that's the "rule," but it still has to be confirmed to exist in every case. We're still assuming that Vebb is a Jedi General, hence my point still stands. CC7567 ^(talk) 23:55, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 05:47, December 28, 2009 (UTC)