Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mee'ma

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Mee'ma

• Nominated by: Mor9347 ^(Talk) 23:50, 25 April 2025 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:
• Date Archived: 20:55, 28 May 2025 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1016 words (233 introduction, 642 body, 141 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 1016 words (231 introduction, 645 body, 140 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Visions WP:ENT

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support votes

1. CometSmudge (talk) 04:01, 4 May 2025 (UTC)
2. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:25, 28 May 2025 (UTC)
3. Lewisr (talk) 18:28, 28 May 2025 (UTC)
4. Gonky1138 (talk) 19:27, 28 May 2025 (UTC)
5. —spookywilloww^talk 19:41, 28 May 2025 (UTC)
6. Booply (talk) 20:54, 28 May 2025 (UTC)

Objections

Lew

• Category:Audio files of Mee'ma can be made and added to the mediacat Lewisr (talk) 17:40, 28 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Added! thank you! Mor9347 ^(Talk) 18:15, 28 April 2025 (UTC)
• The alien reference should be consistent between body and infobox Lewisr (talk) 18:03, 26 May 2025 (UTC)
• Per the manual of style, rebel should be decapitalised Lewisr (talk) 18:03, 26 May 2025 (UTC)
  • Addressed! thank you for reviewing! Mor9347 ^(Talk) 18:49, 26 May 2025 (UTC)

Comet

• Per the manual of style, "whole numbers between one and ninety-nine (inclusive) should be spelled out in article prose"
• "As the act continued, Loi'e spotted an Imperial officer that she believed to have been the officer sitting in a balcony—one she believed had kidnapped her son 20 years prior." This sentence doesn't really make sense to me, I think it might be partially out of order or something like that
• "Loi'e reached the balcony and realized the officer was not the same person—but rather her son—" Instead of saying they weren't the same person, I think it would be a little more clear here if you just restated they weren't the one who kidnapped her son.
• The last sentence of the intro is a bit of a run-on sentence
• In Rebellious rhythms, I know there's not much dialogue relevant to Mee'ma, but would Loi'e ordering Hétis to take the crew members and leave work as a quote, or do you think that's irrelevant since he didn't leave with them? Or is there anything else referring to the crew as a whole that could work? CometSmudge (talk) 03:56, 1 May 2025 (UTC)
  • Addressed all! Mor9347 ^(Talk) 04:13, 1 May 2025 (UTC)
• The second section has Loi'e realizing the officer was her son in both paragraphs. I assume one of those can be removed since she wouldn't have the same realization twice. CometSmudge (talk) 20:14, 2 May 2025 (UTC)
  • Fixed! removed the second one. Mor9347 ^(Talk) 20:38, 2 May 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:54, 28 May 2025 (UTC)