Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mara Jade Skywalker (second nomination)

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.

Mara Jade Skywalker

  1. Orpheus 12:49, 25 April 2006 (UTC)
  2. Breathesgelatin 23:46, 23 May 2006 (UTC)
  3. StarNeptuneTalk to me! 06:20, 24 May 2006 (UTC)
  4. EAGLES610 14:58, 27 May 2006 (UTC)
  5. --Eyrezer 23:42, 30 May 2006 (UTC)

Objections

  • The Dark Nest and Swarm War sections seem to be more of a recap of the Dark Nest trilogy as a whole than focusing on Mara's involvement (especially the Swarm War section, which talks about Luke more than it does Mara). Other than that, I have no problems with it. StarNeptuneTalk to me! 12:59, 25 April 2006 (UTC)

Comments

  • I've looked through this and I think it's almost at FA quality, however, I feel that the Swarm War and Dark Nest sections might need to be trimmed a little. If I had the books I would, but I don't want to touch it without the solid references in front of me. Otherwise, I think it's suitable for a FA. Orpheus 12:49, 25 April 2006 (UTC)
  • This would then be a more suitable candidate for the improvement drive. Only nominate if they're already of featured quality. —MarcK [talk] 13:04, 25 April 2006 (UTC)
    • Just FYI, Mara was on improvement drive back in February. I will try to work on the Swarm War section soon, but yes, let's remember to only nominate articles that are already at FA level. - Breathesgelatin 04:03, 26 April 2006 (UTC)
  • I completely rewrote both the Swarm War and BTS sections of this article and I finally feel that it is up to FA quality. - Breathesgelatin 23:46, 23 May 2006 (UTC)