Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mandalore the Ultimate

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Mandalore the Ultimate

(7 Inqs/2 Users/9 total)

Support

1. Imperialles 00:26, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
2. Cull Tremayne 04:13, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
3. Thefourdotelipsis 04:26, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
4. Per Cull. - Lord Hydronium 11:22, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
5. —Grand Admiral J. Nebulax ^{(Imperial Holovision)} 14:15, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
6. Greyman^(Paratus) 14:03, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
7. --CT-5619 ^{helmet comlink} 23:19, 19 September 2007 (UTC)
8. Graestan ^{(This party's over)} 00:39, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
9. This does not mean I support Mandalorians. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 16:47, 21 September 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

1. From the lair of Hobbes15
   • Clarify that Mandalore was killed, not just defeated, in intro.
     • Fixed. --Imperialles 13:28, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
   • Ref the affiliation part of the infobox, please.
     • Fixed. --Imperialles 13:28, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
   • If possible, mention the origins of the title "Ultimate."
     • Unfortunately, no information regarding that exists (as far as I know). --Imperialles 13:28, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
       • That's fine, not necessary if there's no info. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 21:44, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
   • (1.4) "..., effectively fragmenting the Mandalorian Clans. The Mandalorian fleets were effectively destroyed at Malachor IV..." The two "effectively's" close together in there should be reworded.
     • Fixed. --Imperialles 13:28, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
   • A little bit of detail on what happened when Ordo tried to reunify the Mandalorians, please.
     • I'm not sure what you'd like me to write. I could add something about how he traveled with the Exile, but that would stray pretty close to irrelevancy. --Imperialles 13:28, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
       • I'm not familiar with KOTOR, so I'm not sure what happens, but just a bit on the results of Ordo's attempt; how did it work, how long did it last, something like that. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 21:44, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
         • Ah. Well, we basically don't know. Ordo gathered around 30 or so Mandalorians, and rebuilt a military base. He recruited a few more Mandalorians over the course of KOTOR II, but we don't know what happens afterwards. --Imperialles 07:32, 18 September 2007 (UTC)
           • In that case, my objection is struck. That's all, then. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 21:26, 18 September 2007 (UTC)
   • Otherwise, the article looks fine. Good work, Imp. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 04:19, 17 September 2007 (UTC)
2. From the desk of Atarumaster88
   • Article could use a little more detail on Mandalorian invasion being pushed back- a couple battles are briefly mentioned in NEC. A sentence or two would be nice.
     • Addressed. - Graestan ^{(This party's over)} 00:39, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
   • An appropriate picture- maybe of Canderous, Dxun, or of Malachor V would do- in the Legacy section. Or heck, even Revan.
     • Added picture of Malachor V. --Imperialles 08:06, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
   • Should his Legacy also include delivering on the Republic a lot of devastation on a lot of worlds and helping turn Revan and Malak eeeeviiiiillll?
     • Expanded the Legacy section. --Imperialles 08:06, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
   • Source succession box!
     • Done. --Imperialles 08:06, 21 September 2007 (UTC)
   • Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating Day. Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 23:22, 20 September 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 22:03, 23 September 2007 (UTC)

• As long as the article continues to be updated with the new KOTOR comics. Cull Tremayne 04:13, 16 September 2007 (UTC)
  • I'll do my best. --Imperialles 04:14, 16 September 2007 (UTC)