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M'iiyoom Onith

  • Nominated by: Menkooroo 06:29, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: A Gotal eclipse of the heart.

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. o_O --Imperialles 07:40, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
  2. [Redacted by administration] Thefourdotelipsis 07:55, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote O_o Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 00:44, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Usher and Nicki Minaj's song, "Lil Freak," comes to mind…--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:01, June 8, 2010 (UTC)
  5. [Redacted by administration] --Skippy Farlstendoiro 13:44, June 11, 2010 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote --Eyrezer 22:12, June 11, 2010 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 20:26, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Object

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  • I'm guessing that "It is possible that she did this intentionally in order to lose her chaperone." is a possibility explicitly raised in the source, but I'm just making the requisite objection for clarification here. :P
    • Yup, NEGTAS states: "Whether she did this purposely or accidentally is unknown." If there's a better way to word it on my part, let me know.
  • That's actually all. And I thought I was reprehensible for making a GA out of Ceasar... there are kids on this Wiki, Jeff! Thefourdotelipsis 07:29, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
    • They've gotta learn to watch out for praying mantises some time. Menkooroo 07:49, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
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  • Going back to 4dot's objection, the way the sentence is worded in the article still makes it sound like speculation, even if it isn't really. IIRC, the NEGAS is written in-universe by Mammon Hoole, so you could try to reword the sentence from his perspective.
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  • P&T: "Onith was quick to frighten, and was uneasy entering the cantina, able to sense the dark thoughts and emotions within." This makes it sound like Onith was telepathic/empathic, which I'm guessing she isn't. Could you try to rephrase this slightly?
    • Changed to... "wary of".
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  • Bts: "The cover of The Mos Eisley Cantina Pop-Up Book depicts the Talz Muftak as sitting at the booth with Onith and Trevagg." If that is Onith on the cover, shouldn't the pop-up book be listed in her Appearances section? I would add this myself but I am uncertain whether she is only on the cover or also in the book itself.
    • Yeah, she's totally in it. Whoops.
  • Other than that, great job with tackling another movie character. Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 16:55, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
    • Thank you, you Inquisitor you! Menkooroo 00:27, June 7, 2010 (UTC)
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  • Consider liking transfer station (to space station).
    • Done.
  • Let me see if I get it: Onith and Trevagg sat on a cantina booth with Helrot, even if they did not know him, and they didn't talk with him?
    • Yeah, that's pretty much the gist. They're sitting with him in the film, which is confirmed in the databank entry for Givin. But in both the story and the audio drama, they don't acknowledge his presence.
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    • See Xicer's objection above --- there's no more context to be given without speculating.
  • Onith appears in the manga, but not sitting with Trevagg and Helrot. Momaw Nadon appears with Trevagg and Helrot, as you say. So, where is Onith in the manga?
    • Standing at the bar. Added!
  • Suggestion: Specify that the puppetteer or actor portraying Onith in the movie was not credited.
    • Done.
  • I've had the tune of "Gotal eclipse of the heart" on my head for several days now. Skippy Farlstendoiro 08:29, June 10, 2010 (UTC)
Eyrezer

The card back from her action figure describes her as a regular at the Mos Eisley Cantina. Perhaps you should say this, rather than saying she visitied there "on at least one occasion". --Eyrezer 05:24, June 11, 2010 (UTC) *Awesome, thanks for that. Reworded. Menkooroo 06:04, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

  • [Redacted by administration] Menkooroo 06:34, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:26, June 13, 2010 (UTC)