- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Kryze Castle
- Nominated by: Marvacian Archivist (talk) 11:34, 21 December 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
- Date Archived: 19:00, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1179 words (159 introduction, 811 body, 209 behind the scenes)
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spookly
- History requires sectioning.—spookywillowwtalk 18:42, 3 January 2024 (UTC)
- Hi. Not exactly sure how to section it as all that's written in there is from the same time period, Mando Season 3. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 04:07, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
- Time period aside, still includes too many paragraphs without sectioning for a status article. If it were me, I would split the first paragraph in half, so that a new paragraph starts with the sentence "In 9 ABY, Kryze as well as her followers…" Then I'd put those two subsections in a paragraph titled something like "Seeking the Darksaber." Secondly, I would take the paragraphs starting with "Grogu along with the R5 series astromech droid R5-D4…" and "Kryze managed to save Djarin…" (currently the third and fourth paragraphs) and merge them, given they're very short. That will leave everything below "Grogu along with…"—three paragraphs—to form a second subsection.—spookywillowwtalk 04:12, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
- Hi. Not exactly sure how to section it as all that's written in there is from the same time period, Mando Season 3. Marvacian Archivist (talk) 04:07, 11 January 2024 (UTC)
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Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)
Over two weeks since last reply under idling out rules; original objection left on the 3rd.—spookywillowwtalk 18:57, 29 January 2024 (UTC)- Lewisr (talk) 18:57, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
- Master Fredcerique
(talk) (he/him) 18:59, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
