Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Kith Kark

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Kith Kark

(6 Inqs/5 Users/11 total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Nominated. Greyman(Paratus) 18:19, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
  2. Looks great. --Jedimca0(Do or Do Not, There is No Try) 18:43, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
  3. Jediknight19bby (Jedi High Council Chambers) 20:04, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
  4. I certainly like it. --School of Thrawn 101 04:19, 24 August 2007 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Just a tad anti-climactic after Nomi, but still a very well presented article. Thefourdotelipsis 03:57, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
  6. InqvoteBlarg, more TOTJ stuff. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 19:49, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Cull Tremayne 18:19, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
  8. What a strange name. It's catchy. Kith Kark, Kith Kark... Chack Jadson Talk 19:27, 28 August 2007 (UTC)
  9. Inqvote Imperialles 21:07, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
  10. Can't find anything wrong with this nom. Good work, Greyman. Hobbes15(Tiger Headquarters) 00:00, 31 August 2007 (UTC)
  11. Inqvote —Xwing328(Talk) 05:05, 31 August 2007 (UTC)

Object

  1. Could use a longer intro. Jediknight19bby (Jedi High Council Chambers) 18:30, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
    • Expanded just a little. Though, some FA's do have shorter intro's…it's all about the info available. See here.Greyman(Paratus) 18:52, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
  2. From the desk of Atarumaster88
    • Is it stated that he became a Jedi Knight? It does in the intro, but not in the main body, so it needs to be placed there for reference. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 19:06, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
      • Er, an oversight on my part during the articles writing. Fixed. Greyman(Paratus) 19:11, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
    • That's all on this one. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 19:06, 26 August 2007 (UTC)
  3. Copied from the article: "Back on Antar 4, Kith spent every spare minute studying any information about the Jedi he could find: from ancient texts to tales passed down by word of mouth to even questionable documents<!-- Can this be expounded upon? Questionable documents? It reads too much like a list and leaves me wondering more. -->." I'd like this simple thing cleared up first, per rules 1 and 6. Then I'll support. —Xwing328(Talk) 05:23, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
    • Ouch, my own tag comes back to bite. If I had the sources, I'd do it. In any case, I think my real intent was to have "questionable documents" clarified in a different sentence. That whole sentence kind of breaks from the flow of the text. --School of Thrawn 101 05:27, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
      • Fixed. I rewrote that part accordingly. Greyman(Paratus) 21:28, 30 August 2007 (UTC)
  • Surely there's more to Kark's personality than his distaste for electronics? Would it be possible to expand this section further? --Imperialles 20:02, 30 August 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 12:22, 31 August 2007 (UTC)

  • I wrote this for GA a month or two ago, and have done some work recently (along with a copy-edit courtesy of School of Thrawn 101) in an effort to make it ready for FA. Greyman(Paratus) 18:19, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
    • Is there any way a quote page could be developed? I feel it always helps complete the page. I only request it because I see that his last words aren't mentioned. Also, it might be nice if the Personality and Traits section could be expanded somewhat. However, it won't keep me from supporting. Cull Tremayne 18:19, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
      • No problem, created and added the quote page :) Greyman(Paratus) 21:11, 30 August 2007 (UTC)