Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Keleman Ciro

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Keleman Ciro

(5 Inqs/0 Users/5 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Greyman@wikia(Talk) 14:45, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 22:34, 18 June 2008 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 17:59, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Lord Hydronium 03:06, 22 June 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Thefourdotelipsis 10:17, 22 June 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. From Greyman:
    • You have two {{1st}} templates in the Appearances/Sources sections. I completely understand why you have it that way, due to the nature of the short story and whatnot, but I'd suggest removing the tag from the The DarkStryder Campaign in the Sources, and just leaving the tag alone that is on The Saga Begins.
      • Removed as per suggestion.
    • Your succession box at the very bottom of the article needs to be sourced. Names, dates, etc.
      • D'oh! Sourced.
    • In the BtS you say "Although much of the campaign…" Is that in reference to The DarkStryder Campaign? Or the entire RPG campaign (including the other Darkstryder adventures, etc.)? Could you rewrite that part to make it clear for the reader, if possible? Thanks.
      • I meant the entire campaign, but it is unclear. Reworded.
    • Other than those few things, the article is well done. Greyman@wikia(Talk) 20:47, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
  2. This is minor, but throughout the article, you've got double-spacing. Can you change these to single spacing? :)
    • My bad - I'm so used to writing in double spacing. Fixed.
  3. Also it appears we can narrow his birth year down to a small range. Can you add it to the infobox similar to how it is handled in Jonas Stern? --Eyrezer 22:55, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
    • Done - I've given it an age range of five years unless you think this could be brought down further? - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 07:52, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
      • That looks fine. --Eyrezer 04:59, 3 June 2008 (UTC)
  4. From the desk of Atarumaster88
    • If any detail at all is given besides what's listed, the liberation of Dolomar should be linked to. If not, I'm not going to fret over this.
      • Beyond knowing that it was liberated by internal effort, there's only a mention in the Thrawn Trilogy sourcebook, all of which is in the Dolomar article.
    • The battle of Kal'Shebbol will definitely need to be linked and an article made, if necessary.
      • Article already exists - has been linked to twice, once in the intro and once in the bio. It has been pipelinked in both instances. Can't believe I missed that one ...
    • Mention the Ambition by name in the article please.
      • Added.
    • One of the more interesting nominations I've read recently. Good work and have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 16:32, 20 June 2008 (UTC)

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