- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Kapp Dendo
- Nominated by: AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 22:19, 12 May 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: What I would give for a New Republic Commando-esque game... :-D
(6 Inqs/0 User/6 Total)
Support
Gonk (Gonk!) 14:57, 16 May 2008 (UTC)
"Greyman grumbles about needing to remember to vote when he's done reviewing a certain FAN...two days ago" Greyman@wikia(Talk) 01:58, 29 May 2008 (UTC)
Objections handled via IRC. Great character. Graestan(Talk) 19:54, 30 May 2008 (UTC)
Per Ackbar's nomination comments. Great article. Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 14:53, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:34, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
-- Redundant Guy 03:14, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- From the Long-Lost Gonk of Gonk:
I see "datadisk" and "datadisc." Better determine which is more canonical. I'd look but I don't have it handy.- Checked and fixed. :-)
- More later. Kapp rules. Gonk (Gonk!) 14:36, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
- Yes he does.
The lead quote in P&T is screwy: "about it about people".Gonk (Gonk!) 15:40, 15 May 2008 (UTC)- Odd. I could've sworn I'd corrected that. Fixed now, anyway. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 15:51, 15 May 2008 (UTC)
- From the desk of Atarumaster88
Might want to throw in Terrik's involvement on the Ciutric mission, even if it's not directly related to Dendo.- Added a brief mention.
More context on the Lusankya prisoners please.- Done.
I'm pretty sure "Commando Team One" is singular; check your "was"s and "were"s please. This has popped up more than once and I blame Gonk for not catching them. :-P- I've always referred to teams with "were"s and probably always will, because that's what I see every day in relation to sports teams, but since it's apparently an American vs. British English thing, I've changed them (Grae should catch any I missed) :-) But yes, it's all Gonk's fault.
- Works for me. I've just always seen them written that way in other Wookieepedia articles. Atarumaster88
(Talk page) 14:53, 31 May 2008 (UTC)
- Works for me. I've just always seen them written that way in other Wookieepedia articles. Atarumaster88
- I've always referred to teams with "were"s and probably always will, because that's what I see every day in relation to sports teams, but since it's apparently an American vs. British English thing, I've changed them (Grae should catch any I missed) :-) But yes, it's all Gonk's fault.
- Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88
(Talk page) 15:06, 30 May 2008 (UTC)
- I will. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 19:19, 30 May 2008 (UTC)
- From the Merciless Hammer of Toprawa:
The way the attribution line of the lead quote reads implies that Dendo is speaking the first line, and not the second. Please remedySo what happened? Please do a little bit to clarify that the building exploded or whatever, and that their mission was a success: "With mere moments left on the explosives’ timer, the team escaped and eventually returned to the New Republic base."Can we pipelink a specific system here? "barring the Rogues and commandos from exiting the system"Please link to her clone's article here, upon first mention, and not later on in that paragraph: "and her clone"Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:31, 1 June 2008 (UTC)- Should all be sorted. Thanks for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 10:40, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
File:Dendo bashed.jpg, File:Dendo action.jpg, File:Dendo gloomy.jpg and File:Dendo face.jpg are all distorted and could use re-scans. Does anyone have the comic at all? --Imperialles 12:22, 1 June 2008 (UTC)- I believe Red does, and I've asked him to rescan them. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:54, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
- Red just posted replacements for all four of those. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 03:14, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
- These objections have been addressed for over a week, and the objector has not been around to fulfill his responsibility to strike them. I move for the Inqusitorius to consider the situation, determine if the objections are still valid, and then take appropriate action. -- Ozzel 02:27, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
- Objection overridden by Inquisitorius 18:40, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
- These objections have been addressed for over a week, and the objector has not been around to fulfill his responsibility to strike them. I move for the Inqusitorius to consider the situation, determine if the objections are still valid, and then take appropriate action. -- Ozzel 02:27, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
- Red just posted replacements for all four of those. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 03:14, 2 June 2008 (UTC)
- I believe Red does, and I've asked him to rescan them. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 21:54, 1 June 2008 (UTC)
Inquisitorius vote to strike above objections by Imperialles
Objection is over a week old and has been addressed AND message was left on talk page four days ago. Not a peep, and the FAN page breaks for no one. Especially not when we're in this state. Thefourdotelipsis 09:15, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
What he said. - Lord Hydronium 09:17, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
-- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 11:04, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
This is an all too familiar situation. We need some kind of blanket rule for unattended objections. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 14:55, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
Seal the deal. Graestan(Talk) 16:06, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
I agree here, but Culator, we do have rules for this type of scenario-what we're doing. Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 16:43, 10 June 2008 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 18:40, 10 June 2008 (UTC)