Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Kaox Krul

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Kaox Krul

Support

  1. QuentinGeorge 11:13, 4 January 2007 (UTC)
  2. He really looked like Christopher Eccleston. Kuralyov 05:47, 27 January 2007 (UTC)
  3. Cull Tremayne 09:16, 4 February 2007 (UTC)

Objections

  • Needs personality/traits. .... 10:34, 5 January 2007 (UTC)
    • There's nothing that says it's needed. Kuralyov 05:47, 27 January 2007 (UTC)
      • Apart from my support. Extra context never hurts - articles that are just pure bio really aren't quite FA quality. .... 03:45, 28 January 2007 (UTC)
        • Added a personality and traits section. I think it's a little redundant when put in relation to the entire article, but meh. Cull Tremayne 09:16, 4 February 2007 (UTC)
  • Cleaned up some grammar, but the "Marauder" section stops making sense at the end -- it sounds like some stuff got way too compressed, there. Havac 03:30, 29 January 2007 (UTC)
    • Havac cleared this up. Cull Tremayne 09:16, 4 February 2007 (UTC)
  • In line with the new rules, this article needs to cite its sources. QuentinGeorge 06:21, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
  • Too short of an intro. Quotes are unsourced. More pictures would be lovely. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Audience Chamber) 13:55, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
    • All the quotes are from one source, so that should be easy. There's not much more than can be said in an intro. There are no more pictures. That is all. :P Cull Tremayne 19:27, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
  • One redlink? That can be fixed. Also, for those of us not so familiar with the story, the lightsaber part doesn't make sense if you haven't read the book. (Rule 9) Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Audience Chamber) 05:30, 9 February 2007 (UTC)
  1. This seems far too short to be FA.Darth Ceratis 02:24, 11 February 2007 (UTC)
  • Rule 2 is broken in the last section. Starwarsrulez 21:21, 14 February 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius - Wookieepedia:Inq/Kaox Krul 23:25, 17 February 2007 (UTC)

  • Second of the articles from the NewSithWars Wookieeproject. QuentinGeorge 11:13, 4 January 2007 (UTC)