Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Kamoradon sea dragon

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Kamoradon sea dragon

• Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 19:57, 2 December 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Another animated creature nomination before all of my attention is stolen by Skeleton Crew extras
• Date Archived: 21:30, 28 January 2025 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1457 words (231 introduction, 798 body, 428 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 1452 words (230 introduction, 797 body, 425 behind the scenes)
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Support

1. —spookywilloww^talk 19:09, 28 December 2024 (UTC)
2. Lewisr (talk) 00:27, 30 December 2024 (UTC)
3. <-Omicron^{(Leave a message at the BEEP!)} 15:53, 24 January 2025 (UTC)
4. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 12:31, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
5. OOM 224 12:50, 27 January 2025 (UTC)
6. Booply (talk) 21:29, 28 January 2025 (UTC)

Object

Rsand 30

• So it looks like Star Wars Galaxy of Creatures on StarWarsKids.com (backup link) was actually the 1stID, which mentions Kamoradons in the image gallery. There's no date, but the earliest archive that mentions them is this from January 18, two days before the StarWars.com blog. Rsand 30 (talk) 00:17, 3 December 2024 (UTC)
  • Damn, good catch. Corrected it now. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:44, 3 December 2024 (UTC)

Wok

• First sentence in second para of Biology is kind of a run-on. I think some of that information could be made into a new sentence. Even just moving the snout bit would help.
  • Done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:08, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
• Date for the Galaxy of Creatures stuff should be added in both the intro and the body
  • I'm not really sure that we can use a book that doesn't feature the Kamoradon episode to say it takes place in proximity to the other episodes, especially since there's a city in the episode that looks and awful lot like Tipoca City pre-19 BBY destruction. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:08, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
    • Understood. I've removed that dating from the episode page. Wok142 (talk) 00:27, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
• In the bts, does the "portion" of Republic 50 refer to one of the 3 collections listed on the page for that comic? If so, that can be linked. Wok142 (talk) 18:38, 9 December 2024 (UTC)
  • No, the collections are omnibuses that Republic 50 was reprinted in. We don't have pages for the sections. Ayrehead02 (talk) 00:08, 10 December 2024 (UTC)
• One last thing, I believe it is common practice to spell out numbers over ninety-nine. There are a couple measurements in the Description that can be changed to be numerical. Wok142 (talk) 22:11, 11 December 2024 (UTC)
  • Per the Manual of Style, they can be written as numbers, but it's not mandatory. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:19, 11 December 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 21:30, 28 January 2025 (UTC)